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'fairy Dust'

My heart was hidden behind undetectable ramparts 
He mischievously tiptoed over my heart, spreading fairy dust
Infiltrating every particle, echoing his call~~

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James Fraser

April 3, 2011 at 7:56 AM

Lovely title Wilma, to a lovely poem. It has the mmm appeal....:)

Kash Poet

March 20, 2011 at 10:22 AM

Love it Wilma!EXCELLENT!!---KASH

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 18, 2011 at 4:47 PM

Well it sure sounds like luv is in the air with this eloquent piece Wilma.. sort of reminds me of Ron and me when we first met ..long time ago..it was just this way.. your expressions are intensely beautiful my friend..luv...

Michael J. Falotico

February 18, 2011 at 5:25 AM

WOW, my dear Wilma... This a winner on every level...words, form, and a piece of your heart.. I truly love you work...love Michael...

Constance La France

February 18, 2011 at 5:25 AM

I love this poem, just spectacular and I must try this form Sijo, wonderful~~

Jimmy Anderson

February 17, 2011 at 3:40 PM

Very nice Sijo..good luck if for the Japanese contest....Jimmy

Diane Locksley

February 17, 2011 at 3:29 PM

Just when you least expect it that man works his way into your heart with his fairy dust. Great poem Wilma!

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 17, 2011 at 1:53 PM

Beautiful way to present the thought in Sijo, Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

February 17, 2011 at 10:23 AM

I hope the "fairy dust" led to a a warm and tender relationship. Sometimes love is magical. It seems you were hiding your heart on purpose, but he found a way to "infiltrate" anyway. Wilma, you write well in so many forms. I have never even tried a sijo, but you certainly sparked my interest in it. A delightful read, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

February 17, 2011 at 8:09 AM

i think we should sprinkle fairy dust on all them men who,, control our moods,, and yes,, i know where your comming from,.. I love this sweet little write.. i am inspired with the title,, lol,, i might form a poem,, with the same title,, except different concepts,, of course,.. thanks.. for sharing,..p.d.