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'fairy Dust'

My heart was hidden behind undetectable ramparts 
He mischievously tiptoed over my heart, spreading fairy dust
Infiltrating every particle, echoing his call~~

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James Fraser

Date: 4/3/2011 7:56:00 AM

Lovely title Wilma, to a lovely poem. It has the mmm appeal....:)

Kash Poet

Date: 3/20/2011 10:22:00 AM

Love it Wilma!EXCELLENT!!---KASH

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2011 4:47:00 PM

Well it sure sounds like luv is in the air with this eloquent piece Wilma.. sort of reminds me of Ron and me when we first met ..long time ago..it was just this way.. your expressions are intensely beautiful my friend..luv...

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2011 5:25:00 AM

I love this poem, just spectacular and I must try this form Sijo, wonderful~~

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/18/2011 5:25:00 AM

WOW, my dear Wilma... This a winner on every level...words, form, and a piece of your heart.. I truly love you work...love Michael...

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/17/2011 3:40:00 PM

Very nice Sijo..good luck if for the Japanese contest....Jimmy

Diane Locksley

Date: 2/17/2011 3:29:00 PM

Just when you least expect it that man works his way into your heart with his fairy dust. Great poem Wilma!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/17/2011 1:53:00 PM

Beautiful way to present the thought in Sijo, Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/17/2011 10:23:00 AM

I hope the "fairy dust" led to a a warm and tender relationship. Sometimes love is magical. It seems you were hiding your heart on purpose, but he found a way to "infiltrate" anyway. Wilma, you write well in so many forms. I have never even tried a sijo, but you certainly sparked my interest in it. A delightful read, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/17/2011 8:09:00 AM

i think we should sprinkle fairy dust on all them men who,, control our moods,, and yes,, i know where your comming from,.. I love this sweet little write.. i am inspired with the title,, lol,, i might form a poem,, with the same title,, except different concepts,, of course,.. thanks.. for sharing,..p.d.