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Fairy Comes with a Promise

Twirling her fairy skirt, a lace and pearl dessert. His eyes hypnotized by the lace and pearl overt. Bells on her fingertips, this lace and pearl concert. She gives her all to him in lace and pearl exert. Her father hides her in the lace and pearl turret. But marriage promise gifts lace and pearl convert. Twinkling eyes of the groom splays lace and pearl dessert.

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Date: 7/19/2025 9:11:00 PM
Such a stunning example of the form, Kim. The poem just sparkles. Huzzah! :) Gershon
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Date: 7/19/2025 8:00:00 PM
This poem shimmers with charm and elegance — like the lace and pearls it so beautifully repeats. The refrain gives it a lovely musical quality, almost like a spell being cast stanza by stanza. There's a fairy tale magic here, woven with both innocence and longing. A delicate, enchanting read!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2025 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rowena!
Date: 7/19/2025 4:33:00 PM
wow, what diverse poetic talent you have. This poem flowed like a brides wedding gown train. :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2025 6:25:00 PM
I appreciate you, Sara! Hugs
Date: 7/19/2025 2:18:00 PM
This is really different, your poetic ways are effortless, dear Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2025 2:30:00 PM
I just enjoy! It is how I relax, truly!

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