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Fair Land Lost

Are you the one that blocked the sun? That fired the bullet from the gun That laughed aloud at what you’d done To this fair land that cash built That sat on high upon your throne Surveying what you bought and owned Unhearing of the anguished moans Of this fair land that cash built Was it you that sowed the seed Nurtured it with savage greed Watched it grow to barb clad weed In this fair land that cash built Did you set the tiger free To spread disease and malady Then killed it with unbridled glee In this fair land that cash built Did you cast your mantle dark Extinguish love and caring heart And dance upon the final spark Of this fair land that cash built You put Cuchulain’s name to shame Sold you’re soul for foolish gain On you’re children ladled pain In this fair land that cash built

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/6/2011 12:14:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Eamon. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2010 8:31:00 PM
eamon, I sense this one is very deep with symbolism. I get the meaning but it makes me wish to know who exactly you are referring to in some of the lines. Very nicely done. I love how this reads like the house that Jack built! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/8/2010 7:59:00 AM
There is such irony throughout this poem, especially in the refrain "In this fair land that cash built." Eamon, the reader can see your high moral values and sense the love that is in your heart for all of God's children. A thoughtful, heartfelt poem that emphasizes the senselessness of greed. Well done, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:07:00 AM
Great lyric, Eamon. I really enjoyed your writing style throughout each stanza.
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Date: 11/7/2010 1:51:00 AM
another fine write,eamon.i liked your thoughts about 'the fair land that cash built.'
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:05:00 PM
deep write, Eamon.... thanks for your comments on my works.
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Date: 11/6/2010 2:18:00 PM
well written Lyric and poem. very enjoyed
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