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Fair Day In Carrick

Jostling between the cattle
as they crowded the street
with steaming bodies
I steered my bicycle to school.

Fresh manure lay
in puddles on the ground,
plastering my shoes 
with sloppy mush.

Men with caps and hats
at all  angles, slapped hands
and bargaine, buying
and selling all day long

Many shop windows
were nailed with slats of wood, 
to prevent the glass
being gored by horns.

A few livelier beasts might
wander into pubs and shops,
causing consternation.

On my way home,
shopkeepers with buckets
of water and yardbrushes,
tried to clean the street,

but it still reeked of beasts
and a day of dung.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/20/2015 2:45:00 PM
Very graphic! And yes - i enjoyed reading it! :) john.
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Mary Guckian
Date: 2/20/2015 2:57:00 PM
I have just posted my poem John and happy to find I have readers, glad you enjoyed it, Mary

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