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Faint Thunder

lonesome faint thunder
whispers distant symphony
rain waltzes backstage

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/9/2012 9:15:00 PM
Caryl, as I said in my comment down here earlier, this is really good, and one day you have to enter it into a nature haiku contest because it should be HIGH on a list!!! Congrats on the HM. I sure thought it would do even better!!
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Date: 1/9/2012 12:08:00 PM
Caryl, congratulations with this beauty.. Love the middle line ;) love Wilma
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Date: 1/9/2012 10:24:00 AM
Lovely words. Congratulations Caryl. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/9/2012 8:32:00 AM
Nicely phrased Caryl. Congratulations
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Date: 1/9/2012 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on you win in Brian's contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2011 11:01:00 AM
Congrats Caryl on have all three entries make it to first round competition in PS contest.. good luck luv..
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:42:00 PM
Congrad's on all 3 of your verse moving UP! Light & Love
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Date: 2/15/2011 9:45:00 AM
ejoyed reading this well crafted piece Carl.
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:21:00 PM
ENJOYED YOUR HAIKU~SKAT
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:49:00 AM
Great Haiku for the contest, Caryl! Best of luck!....Gert
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:27:00 PM
What a Haiku, what a show. Good luck in the contest Caryl....:)
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Date: 1/20/2011 11:15:00 AM
Caryl, you have succeed in meeting Charles' challenge remarkably! "Rain waltzes backstage" truly gives life to nature and I think this is exactly what he's looking for. Awesome description throughout! Don't need to wish you luck in the contest -- talent speaks for itself. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2011 7:13:00 AM
Well written imagery, Caryl an best of luck in the contest! Gert
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Date: 1/20/2011 5:26:00 AM
what a blast, caryl!! winnign wishes in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:30:00 AM
Great images drawing an apt picture of the faint thunder, Caryl
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Date: 1/19/2011 9:15:00 PM
wowie, this HAS to get high on the list, Caryl. Love it!
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Date: 1/19/2011 8:51:00 PM
wow,beautiful and the dance image is great. All the very best for the contest.
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:46:00 PM
I can't wait until we have anything that's balmy around here. I'm sick of the winter. Your haiku delightfully describes an oncoming summer storm.
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:46:00 PM
"Stormy Weather" should be playing in the background !! :) Nicely done, Caryl !!
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:25:00 PM
Caryl...this beauty goes right to my faves!...you allow the reader to imagine a gorgeous orchestra waltzing merrily backstage!!!soothing! delicious!!! QUITE EXCELLENT!!! jimbo
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