Faint Thunder

Caryl, as I said in my comment down here earlier, this is really good, and one day you have to enter it into a nature haiku contest because it should be HIGH on a list!!! Congrats on the HM. I sure thought it would do even better!!

Caryl, congratulations with this beauty.. Love the middle line ;) love Wilma

Lovely words. Congratulations Caryl. Love, Joyce

Nicely phrased Caryl. Congratulations

Congratulations on you win in Brian's contest Caryl. Love, Carol

Congrats Caryl on have all three entries make it to first round competition in PS contest.. good luck luv..

Congrad's on all 3 of your verse moving UP! Light & Love

ejoyed reading this well crafted piece Carl.

ENJOYED YOUR HAIKU~SKAT

Great Haiku for the contest, Caryl! Best of luck!....Gert

What a Haiku, what a show. Good luck in the contest Caryl....:)

Caryl, you have succeed in meeting Charles' challenge remarkably! "Rain waltzes backstage" truly gives life to nature and I think this is exactly what he's looking for. Awesome description throughout! Don't need to wish you luck in the contest -- talent speaks for itself. Love, Carolyn

Well written imagery, Caryl an best of luck in the contest! Gert

what a blast, caryl!! winnign wishes in the contest! :) huggs, nette

Great images drawing an apt picture of the faint thunder, Caryl

wowie, this HAS to get high on the list, Caryl. Love it!

wow,beautiful and the dance image is great. All the very best for the contest.

"Stormy Weather" should be playing in the background !! :) Nicely done, Caryl !!

I can't wait until we have anything that's balmy around here. I'm sick of the winter. Your haiku delightfully describes an oncoming summer storm.

Caryl...this beauty goes right to my faves!...you allow the reader to imagine a gorgeous orchestra waltzing merrily backstage!!!soothing! delicious!!! QUITE EXCELLENT!!! jimbo