Failure

I accomplish things for so long then I fail Like a train on a long trip and it derails I don't stop what I begin But the failure continues to win I put my heart into everything I do But I continue to fail what else is new

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/27/2020 2:46:00 PM

As my drill sergeant told me way back in the day: 'You either succeed---or you learn! Smiles, Gershon P.S., Welcome to Poetry Soup, by the way. Stick around. I think you'll like it here! Cheers, Gershon

Erica Berg
Date: 2/16/2020 6:25:00 PM

You can get knocked down, but you don't have to stay there you have the choice to get back up and learn and try again.

Gail Debole

Date: 1/27/2020 7:18:00 AM

As hard as it is, failure is part of life for many. The true failure is giving up. As long as a person doesn't give up, there is another chance for success.

Erica Berg
Date: 2/16/2020 6:26:00 PM

Always, wise words!