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Fading Flame

Written: August 20, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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We built a divine jewel, a flame in the mist, 
But not every fire is destined to persist.
No vows etched in stone, no oaths to renew—
Just the gentle whisper of a love we outgrew.
So speak my name softly, then let it fade—  
Not every farewell needs a curtain shade.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/21/2025 1:47:00 AM

Lost love. Always attracts. I felt an undercurrent of romanticism.

Bill Baker

Date: 8/20/2025 10:43:00 PM

Fine entry for the contest, Sotto. A lot of truth in your poem today, my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2025 2:59:00 PM

This reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. So sad when love turns from its good state to a lesser one. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/20/2025 11:22:00 AM

I think this is a wonderful write to read. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away.......

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/20/2025 9:55:00 AM

engaged from the beginning with 'divine jewel' and 'gentle whisper of a love we outgrew.' Softly realistic with a hint of romaticism. Loved this one too. Wishing you a pleasant day, dear Sotto!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/20/2025 8:02:00 AM

I like this juxtaposition on the usual heartbroken separation. I will dwell on these words for some time. I can imagine their lives going forward, and wonder, "Was it a mistake?"