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Faded With the Night

Within the cinereal swirls of clouded skies I hear the quickened beat of my pulse, fall within my steps and the echoes of mind on these empty streets as i walk alone, lost beneath the shadows of buildings that fall from lambent light of crescent moon in its slow rise I see the glimmer of thousands of faceless stars among night's ebony drop as they trace the darkness scribbled through fate, the distance between us is just as great. I feel hidden from life like the last leaf on near naked trees beneath winter's frigid touch yet i cling beneath the winds of time ungrounded, yet untouched

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Date: 9/7/2019 6:07:00 PM
Hello Sandra Adams, as i read this poem, i can see the images passing by. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 9/8/2019 11:33:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend... hugs :)
Date: 8/5/2019 9:44:00 PM
Quite lovely in scope; wonderful imagery.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/6/2019 2:02:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind words ML :)
Date: 8/4/2019 6:32:00 PM
"I see the glimmer of thousands of faceless stars" - I had never thought of them as faceless, but I guess they are. This is deep!
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Date: 8/4/2019 7:06:00 PM
Thank you...my muse digs some different images up sometimes, but i guess all muses do... :)
Date: 8/4/2019 3:05:00 PM
Last leaf on near naked trees, that's just pure gold, loved this one Sandy. Sometimes when they flow quickly without much thought those are the most satisfying ones of all!
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Date: 8/4/2019 3:21:00 PM
Thank you John, this time of year is often somber, many loved ones left at summer's end, many birthdays of those gone also fall within the same time frame....my muse always pulls something in from it....and i agree, sometimes she struggles when i try to force feed her thoughts, i give in and let her go sometimes :) hugs
Date: 8/4/2019 9:03:00 AM
You penned this beautifully Sandra..
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Date: 8/4/2019 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Joseph....sometimes when i give in to the muse and spare a few minutes the outcome is nicer than force fed thoughts.... hugs :)
Date: 8/4/2019 1:13:00 AM
Sanda this is full of feeling...like the last leaf on near naked trees...nicely penned. a fav.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/4/2019 9:20:00 AM
Thank you Jeanne... this was one of those 5 minute writes from a train of thoughts....glad you enjoyed it...Thanks for the honor of being a favorite of yours :) hugs
Date: 8/3/2019 10:43:00 PM
The pain is felt in each step, in each line of this write. A haunting piece. So nicely done! :) gw
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Date: 8/4/2019 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Gershon, sometimes something sparks a fire under my muse and she goes off in a direction of her own! hugs :)
Date: 8/3/2019 2:59:00 PM
Sandra, I enjoyed reading your poem with the vivid imagery. A lovely and melancholy piece. Love, Kim
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/3/2019 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Kim for your visit and kind words :)

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