Facing the Stark Reality

Shot up so high
Stood touching the sky
Was only a dream
Fell off the seam!

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Hiya Sharma

September 7, 2023 at 1:02 AM

Oh wow, I'm loving this cube form poetry by you, such a wonderful take for the contest.. "Stood touching the sky", "was only a dream" How we imagine our wishes to be on cloud nine, as we glide in stardust symphonies of delicate dreams, and then only to get caught within oscillating illusions, that it was just a myth and never real.. A very heartfelt write!

Bill Baker

September 5, 2023 at 9:51 AM

I like your Verse poem, Valsa. I've seen several today, so it must be for a contest. Good luck, my sweet and kind friend. Bill

Joseph P. DiMino

September 5, 2023 at 7:41 AM

The law of gravity, of age, of a heart seeming dimmer, while eyes fail as sunlight dips into myriads of dusk -- God is always the same. Blessings my friend.

Sotto Poet

September 5, 2023 at 7:26 AM

A magnificent piece of poetry, crafted with meticulous precision, dances gracefully in the mind, a testament to the author's brilliance. With each word carefully chosen, it emits a radiant aura of optimism and hope, a heartfelt offering for success in the upcoming contest