Facing the Stark Reality

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September.5.2023

Cube form Poetry Contest

Sponsor- John Anderson

Shot up so high Stood touching the sky Was only a dream Fell off the seam!

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/7/2023 1:02:00 AM

Oh wow, I'm loving this cube form poetry by you, such a wonderful take for the contest.. "Stood touching the sky", "was only a dream" How we imagine our wishes to be on cloud nine, as we glide in stardust symphonies of delicate dreams, and then only to get caught within oscillating illusions, that it was just a myth and never real.. A very heartfelt write!

Bill Baker

Date: 9/5/2023 9:51:00 AM

I like your Verse poem, Valsa. I've seen several today, so it must be for a contest. Good luck, my sweet and kind friend. Bill

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/5/2023 7:41:00 AM

The law of gravity, of age, of a heart seeming dimmer, while eyes fail as sunlight dips into myriads of dusk -- God is always the same. Blessings my friend.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/5/2023 7:26:00 AM

A magnificent piece of poetry, crafted with meticulous precision, dances gracefully in the mind, a testament to the author's brilliance. With each word carefully chosen, it emits a radiant aura of optimism and hope, a heartfelt offering for success in the upcoming contest

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/5/2023 3:16:00 AM

Wonderful cube poem. Love it. God bless you, Love, Gina