Faces In the Train

I have been used to living alone for so long
I am determined and easy going but headstrong
This morning was rather strange because I was on the train
I woke up with people gallivanting around me in their misery
A life that holds no destiny dark and bleak
They stare and look for something to compare
It was one of those strange mornings
Strange feelings with an awful stench floating in the air
I felt like getting up and dancing, I felt like singing
But there was no music, no song just the croweded slow train rumbling along
It felt like everything was exploding around me
Chatter and rambunctious laughter floated the entire night
The grumbling and mumbling never ceased
And the sounds from plastic bags turned into rattle snakes
Hiding under leaves in the bushes and walking like man
The rhythmical cracks from pumpkin and sunflowers seed 
Spilled over in my ears and later ended up in a garbage heap under the chair
The train crawls and the journey went on and on
I didn’t mind the slow ride as long as I had peace and quiet by my side
But it was not so I was disturbed from every side
The disturbance when on the entire night
And every time I tried to dozed a tiny voice in front of me 
Tuned into a symphony talking to her mom and daddy
The little six years old was screeching like a night owl
Each time I tried to find a comfortable place to put my head
I could hear this busy bumble bee gasping for breath
I open my eyes and said one word in her language
And in seconds she was fast asleep calming the tension in the seat
And at last everyone could get some sleep
I must have had an hour sleep before daylight creeps under my feet
Four and six people crammed in the seat on both side of the train
The seating position made me feel drained
I could not move my leg I had to cross it instead
The day began to get brighter and faces got much clearer
Faces showed up everywhere looking cold and desolate
Miserable and conceited as if they had something to share
Faces in the morning are frightening and guile
Faces in the mornings are outright beguiling
Faces in the mornings are unreservedly lying
Swollen eyes and swollen feet
Heavy sighs and contemptuous laughter 
Grouchy voices and heavy hearts
Mouth shooting like darts out to a hundred meters 
Faces cringed tightly absorbing their secrecy 
Hostile faces, mischievous faces
Horny faces, sad faces, evil faces and foolish face
And the innocent face of the noisy girl  
Spread out fast asleep in her mother’s arms
Morning comes alive and changed the doleful tone
The chatter and laughter increased 
And the honey bee start running around again
The train turned into a market
sellers moving up and down in the aisles 
Shouting out the name of their products as they pass by
Everyone start to do their own thing  while others started to sing
The old men traditional music got louder and louder
Spoil children screaming and shouting above their voices
And the couple sitting in front of me yawed with mouth wide open
Looking at me as if they were ready to fight
They ate the entire night they have a real big appetite
An older woman and a young man
They really had nothing in common
The ignorant and angry man showed his disgust to her
I just could not figure out that strange relationship
A round and plump woman dressed in expensive clothes
A skinny young man dressed in fashionable shoes
What were they all about? 
All dressed in black brand name clothes
With a burden that could not be disclosed 
She wore a  wooden image of Buddha around her neck 
And the Buddhist beads stringed around her wrist
Was he her lover, brother or sexual partner?
These thoughts run through my head
I just could not comprehend 
The Buddha was not a glutton
But this unprincipled couple
Sat in front of me for the entire journey
Eating and grumbling and watching me
Their faces were sad and disturbing
Faces can be very deceiving
Rejected face,
Cunning faces
Lying faces 
Loving faces
Innocent faces
Angry faces
Guilty faces
Faces  tell a true story

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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