Faces

If I could have the enigmatic face of Monalisa,
If I could be that face which carries secret in a smile,
then maybe you could be My Leonardo,the artist in my time.
If I could  be the Queen of Egypt,Be Seductress Cleopatra,
Have Her power and Her strength,then maybe I could be
wrapped in a carpet,be Undressed by  Julius Caesar's hands.
If I could be the beauty,Helen of the Troy,then maybe ships 
would sail towards me,and be abducted by men's joy.
If I could be the Goddess, of passion and romance,
If I could be the sensual Aphrodite,with Ares have my chance.
If I could have the courage,be brave as  Joan of Arc,
then maye I die burnt at stake, wins freedom in my heart.
If I could be these many Special Women,If Only I could be,
then maybe, yes,just maybe,You can be,You can be'The Poet'
who dedicates a sonnet, just for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/12/2010 3:43:00 AM
Celene, you are princess to become a Queen > another poetry gem >> James
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Date: 6/10/2010 1:13:00 PM
The lines of Cleopatra and the rug and Julius Caesar.. a visual like no other from the movie and the story of ancient Egypt .. my fav time in History... this is my new fav today as u have encompassed all of the temptresses in one write... SOUP MAIL...luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/10/2010 12:12:00 PM
....Smile, I think that I shall go visit those colourful autumns leaves once more dear and, "My Love 'To You' Forever & Always," John! ~ Go spread "Your Beauty" dear lady and, save me a kiss or two; from, "The 'Beautiful' Bride!!!!":) ~ Smile, on we go....
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Date: 6/10/2010 12:07:00 PM
....So, You might want to hold off on that tuxedo for awhile--Smile, "I Love 'You' Brother"and, I'm just having a bit of jest with my dearest friend; for, anyone whom sincerely and respectfully loves, "Beautiful Celene," shall forever reside with "Her" within my heart and soul, "Brother!!!" ~ Smile, anyway, I just wanted to stop by to let "Your Majesty" know these things dear lady and, to let "You" know "Your In My Heart," wherever "Your Treasures Are" ~....Cont....
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Date: 6/10/2010 11:53:00 AM
...."You Are 'A Treasure;" beyond any words really and, I want nothing more within this life than, to see "Your Beautiful Smile," brightening up this world, the way that "Your Beauty" has always done my very own....Smile, sorry Ruben but, as You know, I do love Your fiancee, within a place where there is no space and time....Smile, but don't worry Brother, I shall have her back by nine; that is, within another lifetime ~ Smile ~....Cont....
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Date: 6/10/2010 11:33:00 AM
....Smile, popping into "Your Splendors' World" here today dear lady; I have noticed a couple of new or rarer names within "Your" comment boxes dear and, it made my heart so sincerely smile for "You;" for, as I have told "Your Brightness" before dear, I know how much "Your Beauty" loves poetry and, "What A Wonderful Poetess 'You Are'" and, to see "You" here, gathering in flowers and returning them all the same, is musical joys unto my very heart and, unto my deepest soul really; for....Cont....
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Date: 6/10/2010 11:25:00 AM
Smile! ~ "Hello, 'Beyond Beautiful, Celene Cresent!!!!'" ~ I wanted to return to this precious write here dear lady; for my heart remembers promising "Your Beauty" a Sonnet just the other day and, although it sometimes seems as though its been, one step up and two steps back as of late for myself or something; I have not forgotten "My Promise To You!!!" ~ Smile, it shall be my wedding present for "Your Beauty" dear; shhhh, don't tell Mr. Ruben ~ Smile ~....Cont....
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:53:00 AM
Hmmm, I will have to check out this joseph spence guy!! I bet he left you an amazing sonnet! This was a fun poem how you mentioned all these famous women. But JOan of Arc? (Oh, no, I think I could never want to be brave enough to die by fire!) thanks for your really sweet words on my poem today. Let me check some more of our recent poetry out! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/9/2010 4:22:00 PM
Smile! You know, I remember this beautiful poem here dear lady; one of the very first I believe after I had met "Your Treasures;" and, its still as touching and beautiful now as it surely was then...."Yes," I can only "Imagine," how many beautiful poems one day, shall be written across time for "You!!!" ~ Smile, so much heart and beauty within this precious write...."Mesmerizing"...."My Love Forever To You," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Beautiful Tomorrow, 'Beautiful Lady,'" Bye Again Dear!:) ~
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Date: 6/7/2010 9:24:00 AM
WONDERFUL WRITE YOU HAVE HERE, VERY MUCH ENJOYED READING, -IRMA
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:14:00 AM
This is an excellent poem. The message is clear. Later today, I may write a sonnet for you. I will have to put my thinking cap on. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:25:00 AM
A wonderful thoughts. You are Celene. ??? and it's fine. Just find a man to dedicate sonnet to you, Celene.
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Date: 6/7/2010 3:31:00 AM
nice very charming on your poem, have a nice one,..p.d.d.
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Date: 6/7/2010 1:39:00 AM
This is an inspiring write full of womanly wishes! This form could be a rhyme...it flows beautifully. I love the imagery and sentiment you wonderfully convey. Thanks for you kind comment this morning. I wish you success in your writing endeavors. Have a wonderful and blessed day. Kindest Regards, Andrew.
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