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Faceless Fear Premiere Contest Winner

Faceless Fear Inside of me there haunts to be, a pain that never seems to go away, Within a darkened room, of a dismal day... Hell compounds and will confounds, my demons come out to play, Within a darkened tomb, I faintly pray... Help me, Lord, for I’ve cut the cord, my shifting spirit has gone astray, A fateless fetus fume, the unborn made of clay... Wasted years of tormented tears, progressions of my punitive pay, Within a woeful womb, a distant dormant stray... For fear has no face only a place, in my mind a weighted weigh, A deceitful doom, within a guilted gray... The fear of losing love with a shattered shove, an enigmatic inveigh, Where the Jackals loom, a wandering decay... The fear of losing mind only to blind the only thoughts that I portray, Thus my fear abloom, a bereaved bouquet... A faceless fear my soul to steer, the inner wounds need to convey, In my darkened room of my dismal day. Sept.14.2017 Fear II Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 11/10/2017 2:45:00 AM
An appreciated work through nice flowing of ideas, congrats my friend for your top win.
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Date: 10/22/2017 7:37:00 PM
Winged Warrior, your poetry never fails to captivate and amaze me. It's always such a pleasure to read your powerful and creative writes. I'm so happy I found this poem tonight to mull over... Beautiful and a belated congrats for your top win!
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Date: 9/27/2017 5:58:00 PM
Coming back with congrats on your top win.
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Date: 9/27/2017 8:50:00 AM
WW, such a powerful and well-written monorhyme poem that makes the pain of inner fear come alive. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Sandra
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Date: 9/26/2017 11:11:00 PM
Winged Warrior, congrats on your top win! Janice
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Date: 9/26/2017 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations, WW on your great win.
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Date: 9/26/2017 4:32:00 PM
Winged, congratulations on your trophy win with this wonderfully and emotionally penned write !
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Date: 9/26/2017 4:10:00 PM
Very powerful write WW. The reader can feel the fear and darkness. Congratulations on your trophy win.
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Date: 9/26/2017 3:57:00 PM
WW, you have added a depth and dimension to "dismal" beyond the scope of pain. The last line is a piercing description of days of eternal mourning. Harshly, yet beautifully written.
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Date: 9/16/2017 12:33:00 PM
Wow!! This is such a mesmerizing momentous write, WW. It completely captivated my thoughts w/each cerebral fall into the nether dimensions of a darkened mind. Great poem, my friend. One of the best I've read in my lifetime of reading poems. A truly classic poem ... should be a candidate for POTY. Love and peace always.
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Date: 9/15/2017 6:24:00 AM
What an incredible write WW, A winner in my eyes already, not that you need it, but good luck in the contest...Maria
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Date: 9/14/2017 3:32:00 PM
very expressive and well done, WW... fear has many faces; i like!..huggs
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Date: 9/14/2017 2:00:00 PM
Fear can be paralyzing. This is incredible WW! Best luck for the contest! : )
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Date: 9/14/2017 9:34:00 AM
wow man ... your words are brutal ...
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Date: 9/14/2017 9:20:00 AM
No matter how dark a room is and how great the fear it produces still it can be dissipated by a single ray of Lord's light my dearest friend ,WW! An excellent poem on the depiction of fear! Good luck my friend!
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Date: 9/14/2017 7:14:00 AM
Fear well expressed WW--faceless fear, so hard to confront--good luck for a win!
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Date: 9/14/2017 7:04:00 AM
Another really dark poem and strong depiction of fear. You do this alliteration business really well, and I love how you use the inner rhyme.
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Date: 9/14/2017 6:39:00 AM
An excellent write my friend..I have no fear though, well nothing on Earth anyway.. Best way to be...
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Date: 9/14/2017 4:17:00 AM
Wow, now this could have been used for my contest, what a dismal portrayal you have painted for us here my friend! I surely have loved reading your amazing poem this morning WW! You have put Fear in its place, as it may seem to displace, but it leaves those who are prepared! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/14/2017 3:30:00 AM
- This was really a "dark room" ... the demons have taken over the soul ... "Help me, Lord" !!! - Best wishes in the contest with this amazing dark poem W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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