Premiere Contest WinnerFaceless Fear

Faceless Fear Inside of me there haunts to be, a pain that never seems to go away, Within a darkened room, of a dismal day... Hell compounds and will confounds, my demons come out to play, Within a darkened tomb, I faintly pray... Help me, Lord, for I’ve cut the cord, my shifting spirit has gone astray, A fateless fetus fume, the unborn made of clay... Wasted years of tormented tears, progressions of my punitive pay, Within a woeful womb, a distant dormant stray... For fear has no face only a place, in my mind a weighted weigh, A deceitful doom, within a guilted gray... The fear of losing love with a shattered shove, an enigmatic inveigh, Where the Jackals loom, a wandering decay... The fear of losing mind only to blind the only thoughts that I portray, Thus my fear abloom, a bereaved bouquet... A faceless fear my soul to steer, the inner wounds need to convey, In my darkened room of my dismal day. Sept.14.2017 Fear II Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi
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Anthony Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 2:45 AM
An appreciated work through nice flowing of ideas, congrats my friend for your top win.
Ashley Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 7:37 PM
Winged Warrior, your poetry never fails to captivate and amaze me. It's always such a pleasure to read your powerful and creative writes. I'm so happy I found this poem tonight to mull over... Beautiful and a belated congrats for your top win!
Krampe Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 5:58 PM
Coming back with congrats on your top win.
Haight Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 8:50 AM
WW, such a powerful and well-written monorhyme poem that makes the pain of inner fear come alive. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 11:11 PM
Winged Warrior, congrats on your top win! Janice
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Congratulations, WW on your great win.
La France Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:32 PM
Winged, congratulations on your trophy win with this wonderfully and emotionally penned write !
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:10 PM
Very powerful write WW. The reader can feel the fear and darkness. Congratulations on your trophy win.
Lawless Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 3:57 PM
WW, you have added a depth and dimension to "dismal" beyond the scope of pain. The last line is a piercing description of days of eternal mourning. Harshly, yet beautifully written.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 12:33 PM
Wow!! This is such a mesmerizing momentous write, WW. It completely captivated my thoughts w/each cerebral fall into the nether dimensions of a darkened mind. Great poem, my friend. One of the best I've read in my lifetime of reading poems. A truly classic poem ... should be a candidate for POTY. Love and peace always.
Williams Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 6:24 AM
What an incredible write WW, A winner in my eyes already, not that you need it, but good luck in the contest...Maria
Onclaud Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 3:32 PM
very expressive and well done, WW... fear has many faces; i like!..huggs
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 2:00 PM
Fear can be paralyzing. This is incredible WW! Best luck for the contest! : )
Stars Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:34 AM
wow man ... your words are brutal ...
Trifiatis Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 9:20 AM
No matter how dark a room is and how great the fear it produces still it can be dissipated by a single ray of Lord's light my dearest friend ,WW! An excellent poem on the depiction of fear! Good luck my friend!
Pandit Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 7:14 AM
Fear well expressed WW--faceless fear, so hard to confront--good luck for a win!
Krampe Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 7:04 AM
Another really dark poem and strong depiction of fear. You do this alliteration business really well, and I love how you use the inner rhyme.
One Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 6:39 AM
An excellent write my friend..I have no fear though, well nothing on Earth anyway.. Best way to be...
Sivey Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 4:17 AM
Wow, now this could have been used for my contest, what a dismal portrayal you have painted for us here my friend! I surely have loved reading your amazing poem this morning WW! You have put Fear in its place, as it may seem to displace, but it leaves those who are prepared! Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 3:30 AM
- This was really a "dark room" ... the demons have taken over the soul ... "Help me, Lord" !!! - Best wishes in the contest with this amazing dark poem W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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