Carrie Richards Poet Epigram

Facebook Reunion Footles

He looks
Facebook

   Her name!!
   Old flame!

      She wears!!
       new hair
        
         Redhead
         instead! 

              Makes date
              She's late :(
  
                   They greet
                    "Let's....eat!"
   
                        Converse...
                         What's worse?

                             He's bored :(
                             "Pleeeeaze...Lord!!!"

                                     Gets dark
                                     No spark

                                    Goodbye....
                                    He sighs
                           
                              They part
                              sad heart

                   Throws dice
                   try twice???? :)

   He looks
   Facebook




Inspired by Brian Strand's April footle contest

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 11, 2009 at 4:46 PM Is that a shape poem, too? Or just my imagination? Congratulations on placing in Brian Strand's April Footle contest contest.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 22, 2009 at 6:45 PM Dear Carrie, Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Brian's APRIL fOOTLE I Read in Awesome Wonder as I have a hard time writing one let alone a series I Bow to YOUR POETIC Genius Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious comments ALWAYS...HG

Carolyn Devonshire March 18, 2009 at 4:05 PM Thanks for allowing us to share this amusing date with you, Carrie! Love, Carolyn

Brandee Augustus March 16, 2009 at 1:22 PM Very cute and true. Nice poem.

Sean Kelly March 16, 2009 at 3:01 AM Carrie , this is an excellent piece of work ..Well done , again ....

Laurie Ginn March 15, 2009 at 6:20 PM Yeahhssss Carrie this was well deserved so fun!

Lena Townsend March 15, 2009 at 6:00 PM This is cute and I know a few people that have been there and done that! Congratulations on your win! Smiles from Lolita

Barbara Gorelick March 15, 2009 at 5:44 PM This is so timely..it made me laugh..congrats on your win in this footle crazed contest. BG

Robin L. Gass March 15, 2009 at 3:50 PM Congratulations on your win in Brians's contest, Carrie! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter March 15, 2009 at 1:14 PM Warmest congrats Carrie on your excellent win in Brian's contest! Love, Shar

Amy Swanson March 15, 2009 at 10:49 AM This was great Carrie, I don't know how I missed it the first time around! I loved the series and how you brought it back to the beginning again at the end, superb. Congrats on your win in Mr. Strand's footle contest! :) Love, Amy

Brian Strand March 15, 2009 at 10:17 AM Congrats on your success in my footle contest Carrie.Rgds Brian

Mary Duhart March 10, 2009 at 6:24 AM Very cute and creative..Great write.

Sharon Winter March 9, 2009 at 4:57 AM Wow! Awesome job here Carrie! Love it! Love, Shar

Laurie Ginn March 8, 2009 at 8:23 PM Okay IM taking it for a fave

Michael Jordan March 8, 2009 at 1:44 PM Carrie my dear neighbor you crack me up - God Bless, MJ

Laurie Ginn March 8, 2009 at 12:53 PM Yeahssss Carrie, sometimes its more fun talking in shorthand. This is so fun.

Sean Kelly March 8, 2009 at 9:13 AM Super , souper , piece , Carrie ... Very well done .... Been There ...... Not Fair ... !!

Robin L. Gass March 8, 2009 at 8:46 AM Excellent write, Carrie! Very funny and extremely creative! You go girlfriend! Love, Robin

Christopher Higgins March 8, 2009 at 7:47 AM That is funny Carrie.. I love the form of this....I love the story you tell with this form...Well done...FB is very interesting.. Meeting up with lots of friends from the past..

Lucinda Bulger March 8, 2009 at 7:17 AM awww.Pictures say so much huh? well, personally I put my best pictures online... right now, going through an ugly stage (as metamorphosing into a butterfly can be difficult) trying to purify my body, mind and soul, I'll get there oneday, till then I have but images on photographic paper to go on... :) nicely written, can't say I haven't longed for a reunion cause I have. good job here, Cindy