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Fabulous Fun Footles - Berry Drunk

Monkeys In trees Eating Berries Berries Make drunk Monkeys Ker plunk Rolling On ground Stand up Fall down Sleep off Drunk state Monkeys Mistake 23rd March 2017

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Alexis Y.
Date: 4/1/2017 9:30:00 AM
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Hi Elizabeth, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/1/2017 9:42:00 AM
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Thank you
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/31/2017 7:22:00 PM
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You made a fun poem for the contest Elizabeth. Your first footle was fabulous and rhymed perfectly but the following footles did not have exact rhyme:-) Many congrats on your placement in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/1/2017 12:53:00 AM
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I'm still learning. I'll try another one soon. Thank you for your help and encouragement Jan x
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John Michaels
Date: 3/25/2017 8:00:00 AM
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Nice visuals! Good luck with the contest!
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/25/2017 12:22:00 PM
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Thank you John for visiting and commenting.
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Roy Pett
Date: 3/24/2017 6:34:00 PM
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Great footle Elizabeth, funny and well written, Roy. :))
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/25/2017 1:45:00 AM
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Thank you Roy.
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Joseph May
Date: 3/24/2017 7:31:00 AM
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Very nice Footles Elizabeth..best wishes
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/24/2017 10:47:00 AM
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Thank you for visiting and commenting Joseph.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/23/2017 7:15:00 AM
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This was fun Elizabeth. I wonder, were those monkeys drinking banana daiquiris?
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/23/2017 2:17:00 PM
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Haha Chris:)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/23/2017 3:32:00 AM
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Delightful dear, Elizabet. I start my day with a smile. Thank you and a 7!
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/23/2017 6:25:00 AM
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Thank you Demetrios, I'm glad I made you smile. :)

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