Andrea Dietrich Poet Alliteration

Fabulous Foods

Fish, fresh fruits, fun french fries; pizza, popcorn, pecan pies;
Tacos and tahini; ziti and zuchinni;
Hamburgers and ham; jelly and jam;
Raspberries red; bacon, biscuits, and buttered bread;
Cheese and chips; doughnuts and dips;
Candies, cookies, and cakes; soups, salads and steaks.
To make me happy, feeding me food is just about all it takes!

(never used in a contest before)
For  'A STRAND (1055)' Poetry Contest

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Connie Marcum Wong January 25, 2022 at 4:52 PM Congratulations on your top win Andrea. You should have been married to my husband who loved to cook and loved to eat. The best part was he also cleaned up after himself. Blessings xxoo

Christuraj Alex January 20, 2022 at 10:35 PM "Fish, fresh fruits, fun french fries;" - Beautiful in Fs. "food is just about all it takes_ - True. We are what we eat. Congratulations!

Jennifer Proxenos November 9, 2021 at 9:27 AM I think your list of food certainly encompasses a great many of my likes and your poem is a happy one, eating is a great part of our lives, we eat we work we sleep we play, so I would join you in your happiness about food, just dislike greasy. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit November 7, 2021 at 5:15 AM Delicious word and food pairings, Andrea. All the best.

Victor Buhagiar November 7, 2021 at 1:28 AM I thought you were on a diet :) Best for a win. Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2021 at 9:15 AM Sure, Victor. The Seefood diet!!

Bill Baker November 6, 2021 at 4:28 PM Good luck in the contest ... interesting way to let us know the foods you like. Lots of alliteration and technically well written. I look forward to entering some contest once I'm settled in here at poetry soup. Bill Baker

Debra L Brown November 6, 2021 at 3:26 PM Andrea, Outstanding poem. Good luck, on the Contest. Blessings ~ Debbie

Judy Ball November 6, 2021 at 1:12 PM Ecellent entry for the contest Andrea. Good luck. God Bless, JB Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2021 at 9:17 AM It was not written correctly, so don't look to it as a way to do the contest.

Darlene De Beaulieu November 6, 2021 at 1:00 PM Hello Andrea, all this food made me hungry. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham November 6, 2021 at 10:10 AM Enjoyed your verse Andrea but I'm feeling hungry now lol. Tom

L Milton Hankins November 6, 2021 at 9:59 AM Very nicely and creatively done, Andrea. I really struggled with this one. That you managed to make them rhyme is masterful.