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Fabricated Falsehood Collaboration With Silent One

In silence we admire the splendor of our universe, surrounded by breathtaking scenery ever so diverse. Golden Sun, pale moon and silver stars animate an artist's mind, whilst a poet creates imagery pleasing eyes that are blind. Whispers of serene stars echo like a melodic lullaby, but some dark minds serenade in lyrics we can't identify. We all become fragile reflecting a mourning butterfly, but some souls adopt envious eyes clouded in ebony skies. In a dream world of charm, jealousy is an undying misery, resentment is regretful with fake tales veiled in mystery. Some ink is invisible when scribbled across a canvas of tragedy, especially when the tongue paints an image of insanity. Sincerity is a charm of elegance only pure hearts emanate, immune to fabricated falsehoods a storyteller will narrate.

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Date: 11/11/2023 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations to you both for receiving POTD. An excellent choice.
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Date: 9/16/2023 3:06:00 PM
As invisible as lemon juice and heat but still the words are carved on the soul, what a beautiful creation you too, Bravo !
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Date: 9/16/2023 8:17:00 AM
Just beautiful!!Enjoyed reading your poem a lot.Loved the last lines and Congratulations! keep smiling :)
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Date: 9/9/2023 5:33:00 AM
Belated congratulations on the POTD. I think my lap top was in the shop as I missed this very well done collaboration poem. A very warm welcome to the soup which is a very supportive network of poets I think.
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Date: 9/7/2023 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations to both of you on this excellent collaboration and POTD! Charlie
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Date: 9/4/2023 8:27:00 PM
Congratulations to both of you on your beautiful collaboration. They’re probably just envious of your amazing talent. So keep shining :)
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Date: 9/3/2023 11:58:00 AM
Many congratulations to you both for a terrific poem and POTD! A big welcome too. Some truly beautiful lines. Looking forward to reading more from you. Warmest wishes.
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Date: 9/3/2023 11:17:00 AM
Back with congrats. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/3/2023 11:07:00 AM
A deep and meaningful poem, of the tragedy of jealousy and betrayal. The rhythm and flow of your poetry is natural and easy to read. Congratulations to both of you on the honor of POTD! Enjoy your first day of recognition here on Poetry Soup, The aura Rhymes. Welcome! A poet in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/3/2023 9:20:00 AM
From observation: those seeking to steal the shine from twinkling stars, hold no sparkle themselves. So sad, indeed. Jealousy means, someone is in a delicate state, and breaking those around them; builds their confidence. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Aura. Congratulations to you and Silent One, on receiving Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/3/2023 8:39:00 AM
Welcome The Aura Rhymes, it's nice to see more young inspiring poets. Congratulations on your collaboration POTD! Truth be told, there are those of maleficent proclivities. Sincerity is a charm of elegance, like your poetry.. I wish you well as long as you are here, and protected from poisoned pens. ~I Am Anaya
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Date: 9/3/2023 8:26:00 AM
Oh wow, you got POTD! Fastest ive know anyone to get it. Well done! Thank you to everyone for their kind comments and for welcoming the aura of rhymes to our community of poets... lets support one another and flourish together..
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Date: 9/3/2023 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations to both of you for this POTD win. A great collaboration for a wonderful write. Great ending. The world is filled with jealousy but when it is family/friend it is extra painful. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 7:38:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/3/2023 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations AR on POTD for a truly lovely poem! Debx
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 7:37:00 AM
Appreciate it
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 7:34:00 AM
Appreciate it
Date: 9/3/2023 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations to both of you for this outstanding beautiful POTD :)
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 7:34:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/3/2023 7:05:00 AM
Such an exquisite collaboration aura Rhymes with the very talented Silent One. A poem that speaks more in such few lines... "Some ink is invisible when scribbled across a canvas of tragedy"... so meaningful... Warm welcome to Soup, dear aura Rhymes... Hugs... ~ Ani
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 7:38:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome
Date: 9/3/2023 6:45:00 AM
Great collaboration, Congrats on POTD to both of you,
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Date: 9/3/2023 6:18:00 AM
Wow! Congrats on your POTD! A talented sister of a talented brother! That's so heartwarming! The poem is exquisite! Looking forward for more!
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 7:34:00 AM
Indeed a very talented brother . Thank you
Date: 9/3/2023 6:11:00 AM
A wonderful collaboration, congratulations to you both on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 7:33:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 9/3/2023 5:47:00 AM
Beautiful Collaboration."Sincerity is a charm of elegance only pure hearts emanate, immune to fabricated falsehoods a storyteller will narrate.".... Such meaningful concluding lines. Congratulations dear friend on the honor of POTD
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 5:49:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 9/3/2023 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honors !! The line " Sincerity is a charm of elegance only pure hearts emanate" touches me most! A beautiful write! Enjoy your day !!!
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Date: 9/3/2023 5:26:00 AM
Thank you . Appreciate your kind words
Date: 9/3/2023 5:20:00 AM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup, aura Rhymes and BIG congrats to both of you on POTD. The two ending lines spell the essence of your poem for me. Great message throughout. Kudos to you both on your poetic prowess.
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 5:21:00 AM
Thank you so much . I look forward to read your poems too
Date: 9/3/2023 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, SO and Aura Rhymes, a thought provoking poem.
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Date: 9/3/2023 5:21:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 9/3/2023 5:04:00 AM
That last stanza says it all, embrace truth and reject the lie. So glad you joined PS Aura. Great Collab you two and potd worthy
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Date: 9/3/2023 5:22:00 AM
Yes very excited to experience this place
Date: 9/3/2023 4:50:00 AM
- Jealousy is really a negative emotional reaction and no doubt create big problems... an excellet co-poem - Welcome to P-Soup :) - Congratulations on the p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 5:23:00 AM
Thank you
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 5:22:00 AM
Thank you
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