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January 31, 2024

Placed 1st: Ghazal Form Contest by Sotto Poet
14 Syllables Per Line (HMS.com)

Poem of the day on February 1, 2024


 

Fable of the Night

O, my angel, how smitten are yearnings of lonely night!
Will lover’s fantasy enchant, dream of this dreary night?

Though alluring is its rhythm, are you aware my sweet love,
Forlorn is the song, vying favor of this sullen night?

Glance of seduction, glamor of opulence, express doubt:
Can an enamored moon enthrall, this melancholic night?

My dear, how sincerely must I plead, to heavens above:
Let dawn of desires blossom, in passion of wistful night!

It is the quest of my appeal and zeal of my longings:
Oh, fervor of my love, conquer this solitary night!

Have you not heard my love, benevolence of my prayer,
Appealing to the goddess, tolling fervid wish of night?

Voice of love proclaims~ fertile is ending of our story:
Passions will flourish, sowing seeds of love, in womb of night.

You too heard the prophecy, in words of Aphrodite: 
Epistle of romance bestows, entrance to glory night!

Expect me my dear, commanding the chariots of knights;
Welcome me with a kiss, to empire of hypnotic night.

O, my angel, open your heart, let-in dream of lifetime,
Where we shall dwell forever, crafting fable of the night.
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Xiang Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 10:04 PM
Beautifully crafted poem. I can feel the perfume of a desert night. Congratulations.
Tor Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 9:25 PM
Late Congratulations Vijay. Your passion transcends all hearts that read this recognized winning creation of yours. As always my friend you set the standard for excellence!!
AGARWAL Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 10:24 PM
So mesmerizing. Also new here please guys give my poems a read:)
Kulkarni Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 10:38 AM
A romantic ghazal Vijay! Great use of words!! -Smita
Juju The Dragon Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 1:48 PM
Beautiful...Thank You For Sharing!
Costales Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 2:02 PM
Hi Vijay, It's been a while since I've visited this site. Life happened, but the strings of this forum keep tugging at me to visit prolific poets as you and get me inspired again. As usual, your writings are such a delight to read - this one so romantic, I feel envious of your "angel" of the night. Josefina
Sands Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Hi Vijay. Double Congratulations to you for this excellent poem that made POTD and a win in this contest! Well done. :)
Kauffman Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 12:00 PM
Belated congratulations for your POTD, Vijay and now congratulations for your win! Your poem overflows with tenderness! It is a gentle invitation to intimacy.
Gentile Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 4:35 AM
Vijay, belated congratulations but congratulations no less for your beautiful achievement and recognition as POTD! I was not familiar with this form, you have executed it so wonderfully while also maintaining your signature style in the yearning of romance! Happy Friday!!
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Much appreciate, Mike. Always a delight when you visit my friend. Many thanks.
Schatz Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 12:07 AM
"Can an enamored moon enthrall, this melancholic night?" Congratulations on winning POTD!
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 6:11 AM
Thank you Robert. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Grieves Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 9:15 PM
Ah the ache of love and the simultaneous rapture seems captured here in your colourful words, Vijay. Very lovely, heartfelt Poem of the Day for the 'month of love' ;))
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 6:10 AM
Much appreciate your kind feedback, Christopher. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Nicole Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 6:47 PM
' Passions will flourish ' and desires will bloom, on a starry night under a magical moon. This is beautiful and romantic, with a little melancholy within. Soft and dreamy, as well. So many emotions tangle around me and my heart. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 6:09 AM
Always a joy when you visit my friend. Much appreciate your detailed and kind remarks, Brandy. Many thanks for being there. Hugs to you as well.
Buehler Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 6:43 PM
A beautiful poem, so deserving of POTD, Vijay! It is in my faves. Warmest congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 6:08 AM
So special to read your kind remarks and to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks, Evelyn.
Baker Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 5:00 PM
Well written ghazal poetry, Vijay. Congratulations on your POTD, my friend! Enjoy your day of recognition. Bill
Pandit Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 6:06 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Doll Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 3:56 PM
Vijay, congratulations on POTD~ Warren
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 4:00 PM
Thank you Warren--much appreciate.
One Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 1:29 PM
Just back to congratulate you on potd..
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 3:59 PM
Thank for your return visit, SO--much appreciate.
Empress Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 11:17 AM
So good to see you receive POTD. Well deserved dear Vijay. Enjoy your day
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 3:56 PM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your return visit, Ink.
Roper Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on POTD
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 3:58 PM
Thank you Eve--much appreciate.
Kitchin Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:20 AM
Vijay, congratulations on POTD.
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:45 AM
So glad to see you again, Tania. Always a joy when you visit. Many thanks.
M  Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:17 AM
Well done Vijay…you and your wonderful poem are so deserving of POTD….Congratulations my friend!! Debx
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:44 AM
That is a joy to hear, my friend--stemming from a kind heart. Much appreciate your feedback, Deb. Many thanks, as always.
Fowler Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:08 AM
Hello my friend. I'm back with huge congratulations on your exquisite POTD. Enjoy! :)
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:43 AM
Thank you my friend for your return visit. Much appreciate, as always.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again... Have a wonderful day writing away with your win.............
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:42 AM
Much appreciate your return visit, Paula. Many thanks, my friend.
Kaufman Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 6:21 AM
Hi Vijay, Congratulations on this passionate and wonderfully penned POTD. I will now have to fav it. Good luck on your contest as well, so timely for Valentine's Day.
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:41 AM
Honored by your visit, Nancy. Glad to see you again. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
May Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 5:54 AM
Congrats on POTD Vijay
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:39 AM
Thank you Joseph--many thanks.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 4:21 AM
Incredible lovely love poem. Perfect rhyme, and simply exhilarating. Congratulations on your POTD.
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:39 AM
So glad to hear that--especially from you, Victor. Much appreciate, as always--many thanks,
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