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Fable of Romance

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Oh, my darling, how passionately you whisper to me Secrets of forbidden love, titillating magical feelings Mesmerizing romantic night in blossoms of dreams Beckoning to heavens above to fulfill sweet fantasy Alluring sensuous desires twinkling in glistening skies As I feel your vibes, sparkling in your glamorous eyes. Ah! river’s serene zeal rejoices your sensuous appeal Rippling exhilaration emanating from tranquil stream Sensing my arrival in tenor of soft midnight breeze Rustling shamrock leaves echoing hearts’ tender music As melodies of doting souls warble from smitten trees Jubilant in aspirations, mythical fascinations reveal. Chasing earthly passions in rhythms of ecstatic ballad Oh, how I, quixotic star, inflame in your cuddling arms Crooning breaths on sensual lips, answering you call Satiating night you vied for, till I part at stroke of dawn Leaving behind part me to forever cheer your heart Inscribing upon eternal memories, fable of romance. September 30, 2020 Placed 1st: Impacts and metaphors poetry contest

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Valsa George

Date: 8/2/2022 7:42:00 PM

Mesmerizing romantic night, glistening skies, tranquil streams, rustling shamrock leaves....! I, am in a dreamy world... Elysian and otherworldly !

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/9/2020 4:21:00 PM

Back to read this wonderful poem again, Vijay :) ~ Angie

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2020 7:41:00 AM

Thank you Angela.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/4/2020 6:16:00 AM

This is beautiful Vijay. You write these romantic poems so well! Congratulations for your win :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2020 1:28:00 PM

Much appreciate Heidi. Hope you are doing well. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2020 5:48:00 PM

this is wonderful, Vijay. I am not seeing it from the winner list, but I take it you got a win, so congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2020 5:48:00 AM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/3/2020 3:34:00 PM

Vijay, your symbolisms accentuates the stimuli of drawn depictions that has been successfully executed my friend, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/4/2020 5:47:00 AM

Much appreciate William--many thanks.

Silent One

Date: 10/3/2020 11:17:00 AM

You do romance very well and have used a metaphor very poetically here...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/3/2020 1:35:00 PM

Much appreciate, SO--many thanks my friend.

Elaine George

Date: 10/2/2020 11:38:00 PM

Such a beautiful personification, dear Vijay...and a very moving picture. Thank you for sharing. ~ Elaine

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/3/2020 5:41:00 AM

Thank you Elaine--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/2/2020 8:35:00 AM

A moving and memorable entry to be proud of Vijay. This golden gem is going into my faves! It is sure to be at the top! Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2020 1:06:00 PM

So glad to read your comments Connie. Much appreciate--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE. I am happy to see you back.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/1/2020 4:38:00 PM

A very moving piece, Vijay. I really like the way you formed this. My favorite line, "Leaving behind part me to forever cheer your heart". :) Peace, Angie

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2020 4:53:00 AM

Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/1/2020 1:43:00 AM

Your stunning metaphors are entrancing! They are dipped into a "sparkling and glamorous" charm of moon! An aura of romantic radiating with a heavenly beauty! You always ascend to higher possibilities of fine poetry, dear Vijay! So pleased to read your wonderful work! A win! My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/1/2020 5:08:00 AM

So very kind of you my friend. Always a delight to read your comments. Much appreciate, Besma, as always. Many thanks. Regards.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/1/2020 12:27:00 AM

Magical and mesmerising poetry, Vijay:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/1/2020 5:06:00 AM

Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/30/2020 9:18:00 PM

Beautiful heart warming poetry.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/1/2020 5:06:00 AM

Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/30/2020 2:27:00 PM

The moon is magical within this photo, as the water moves slowly. Your thoughts create such a beautiful mood. Romantic, soft and sensual. Simply breathtaking my dear friend. Once again, your words caress my being, in such a wonderful way. :) Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/1/2020 10:15:00 AM

Such a beautiful thought. This belongs in a poem somewhere.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/30/2020 3:34:00 PM

To me it is a lonesome star visiting earth at the invitation of human admirer while the moon and other stars above enlighten the sky. Much appreciate your comments my dear friend. Always a joy when you visit. Many thanks, Brandy.