Vijay Pandit Poet Personification

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Fable of Romance

Oh, my darling, how passionately you whisper to me
Secrets of forbidden love, titillating magical feelings
Mesmerizing romantic night in blossoms of dreams
Beckoning to heavens above to fulfill sweet fantasy
Alluring sensuous desires twinkling in glistening skies
As I feel your vibes, sparkling in your glamorous eyes.

Ah! river’s serene zeal rejoices your sensuous appeal
Rippling exhilaration emanating from tranquil stream 
Sensing my arrival in tenor of soft midnight breeze
Rustling shamrock leaves echoing hearts’ tender music
As melodies of doting souls warble from smitten trees
Jubilant in aspirations, mythical fascinations reveal.

Chasing earthly passions in rhythms of ecstatic ballad
Oh, how I, quixotic star, inflame in your cuddling arms
Crooning breaths on sensual lips, answering you call
Satiating night you vied for, till I part at stroke of dawn
Leaving behind part me to forever cheer your heart
Inscribing upon eternal memories, fable of romance.

September 30, 2020
Placed 1st: Impacts and metaphors poetry contest

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Valsa George August 2, 2022 at 7:42 PM Mesmerizing romantic night, glistening skies, tranquil streams, rustling shamrock leaves....! I, am in a dreamy world... Elysian and otherworldly !

Angela Crabtree October 9, 2020 at 4:21 PM Back to read this wonderful poem again, Vijay :) ~ Angie Vijay Pandit October 12, 2020 at 7:41 AM Thank you Angela.

Heidi Sands October 4, 2020 at 6:16 AM This is beautiful Vijay. You write these romantic poems so well! Congratulations for your win :) Vijay Pandit October 4, 2020 at 1:28 PM Much appreciate Heidi. Hope you are doing well. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2020 at 5:48 PM this is wonderful, Vijay. I am not seeing it from the winner list, but I take it you got a win, so congratulations! Vijay Pandit October 4, 2020 at 5:48 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

William Kelii Kekaula October 3, 2020 at 3:34 PM Vijay, your symbolisms accentuates the stimuli of drawn depictions that has been successfully executed my friend, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William Vijay Pandit October 4, 2020 at 5:47 AM Much appreciate William--many thanks.

Silent One October 3, 2020 at 11:17 AM You do romance very well and have used a metaphor very poetically here... Vijay Pandit October 3, 2020 at 1:35 PM Much appreciate, SO--many thanks my friend.

Elaine George October 2, 2020 at 11:38 PM Such a beautiful personification, dear Vijay...and a very moving picture. Thank you for sharing. ~ Elaine Vijay Pandit October 3, 2020 at 5:41 AM Thank you Elaine--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Connie Marcum Wong October 2, 2020 at 8:35 AM A moving and memorable entry to be proud of Vijay. This golden gem is going into my faves! It is sure to be at the top! Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit October 2, 2020 at 1:06 PM So glad to read your comments Connie. Much appreciate--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE. I am happy to see you back.

Angela Crabtree October 1, 2020 at 4:38 PM A very moving piece, Vijay. I really like the way you formed this. My favorite line, "Leaving behind part me to forever cheer your heart". :) Peace, Angie Vijay Pandit October 2, 2020 at 4:53 AM Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Besma Riabi Dziri October 1, 2020 at 1:43 AM Your stunning metaphors are entrancing! They are dipped into a "sparkling and glamorous" charm of moon! An aura of romantic radiating with a heavenly beauty! You always ascend to higher possibilities of fine poetry, dear Vijay! So pleased to read your wonderful work! A win! My deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit October 1, 2020 at 5:08 AM So very kind of you my friend. Always a delight to read your comments. Much appreciate, Besma, as always. Many thanks. Regards.

Joanna Daniel October 1, 2020 at 12:27 AM Magical and mesmerising poetry, Vijay:) Vijay Pandit October 1, 2020 at 5:06 AM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman September 30, 2020 at 9:18 PM Beautiful heart warming poetry. Vijay Pandit October 1, 2020 at 5:06 AM Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole September 30, 2020 at 2:27 PM The moon is magical within this photo, as the water moves slowly. Your thoughts create such a beautiful mood. Romantic, soft and sensual. Simply breathtaking my dear friend. Once again, your words caress my being, in such a wonderful way. :) Brandy Brandy Nicole October 1, 2020 at 10:15 AM Such a beautiful thought. This belongs in a poem somewhere. Vijay Pandit September 30, 2020 at 3:34 PM To me it is a lonesome star visiting earth at the invitation of human admirer while the moon and other stars above enlighten the sky. Much appreciate your comments my dear friend. Always a joy when you visit. Many thanks, Brandy.

Mystic Rose Rose September 30, 2020 at 1:42 PM I send you a rose of friendship scent, for this beautiful romantic write dear Vij, always your fervent reader here. Thankyou Vijay Pandit September 30, 2020 at 3:30 PM Much appreciate your rose of friendship, Vienna. Always a pleasure--many thanks my friend.

Tom Cunningham September 30, 2020 at 10:20 AM Very well composed Vijay, your romantic quill is aflame. Good luck in the contest. Tom Vijay Pandit September 30, 2020 at 11:08 AM Thank you Tom. Much appreciate, as always.

Victor Buhagiar September 30, 2020 at 8:45 AM What I admire most in this special poem is that every word has its proper place, enticing with allure and love. Luck with a highest placing. ~~ Vijay Pandit September 30, 2020 at 11:08 AM So very kind of you, Victor. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy September 30, 2020 at 8:19 AM Another brilliantly vivid, moving masterpiece, Vijay. Janice Vijay Pandit September 30, 2020 at 11:07 AM Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2020 at 7:17 AM - Beautiful, warm and romantic Vijay - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit September 30, 2020 at 7:46 AM . You are so very kind. Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.

Regina Mcintosh September 30, 2020 at 6:06 AM A beautiful vision of inspiration that soothes and caresses the spirit. I enjoyed it so much. God bless you, my dear friend Vijay Pandit September 30, 2020 at 7:45 AM Much appreciate, Gina--many thanks for your kind remarks.