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Fable of Romance

Oh, my darling, how passionately you whisper to me
Secrets of forbidden love, titillating magical feelings
Mesmerizing romantic night in blossoms of dreams
Beckoning to heavens above to fulfill sweet fantasy
Alluring sensuous desires twinkling in glistening skies
As I feel your vibes, sparkling in your glamorous eyes.

Ah! river’s serene zeal rejoices your sensuous appeal
Rippling exhilaration emanating from tranquil stream 
Sensing my arrival in tenor of soft midnight breeze
Rustling shamrock leaves echoing hearts’ tender music
As melodies of doting souls warble from smitten trees
Jubilant in aspirations, mythical fascinations reveal.

Chasing earthly passions in rhythms of ecstatic ballad
Oh, how I, quixotic star, inflame in your cuddling arms
Crooning breaths on sensual lips, answering you call
Satiating night you vied for, till I part at stroke of dawn
Leaving behind part me to forever cheer your heart
Inscribing upon eternal memories, fable of romance.

September 30, 2020
Placed 1st: Impacts and metaphors poetry contest

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Valsa George Date: 8/2/2022 7:42:00 PM Mesmerizing romantic night, glistening skies, tranquil streams, rustling shamrock leaves....! I, am in a dreamy world... Elysian and otherworldly ! Login to Reply

Angela Crabtree Date: 10/9/2020 4:21:00 PM Back to read this wonderful poem again, Vijay :) ~ Angie Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/12/2020 7:41:00 AM Thank you Angela.

Heidi Sands Date: 10/4/2020 6:16:00 AM This is beautiful Vijay. You write these romantic poems so well! Congratulations for your win :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/4/2020 1:28:00 PM Much appreciate Heidi. Hope you are doing well. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/3/2020 5:48:00 PM this is wonderful, Vijay. I am not seeing it from the winner list, but I take it you got a win, so congratulations! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/4/2020 5:48:00 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Hilo Poet Date: 10/3/2020 3:34:00 PM Vijay, your symbolisms accentuates the stimuli of drawn depictions that has been successfully executed my friend, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/4/2020 5:47:00 AM Much appreciate William--many thanks.

Silent One Date: 10/3/2020 11:17:00 AM You do romance very well and have used a metaphor very poetically here... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/3/2020 1:35:00 PM Much appreciate, SO--many thanks my friend.

Elaine George Date: 10/2/2020 11:38:00 PM Such a beautiful personification, dear Vijay...and a very moving picture. Thank you for sharing. ~ Elaine Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/3/2020 5:41:00 AM Thank you Elaine--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/2/2020 8:35:00 AM A moving and memorable entry to be proud of Vijay. This golden gem is going into my faves! It is sure to be at the top! Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/2/2020 1:06:00 PM So glad to read your comments Connie. Much appreciate--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE. I am happy to see you back.

Angela Crabtree Date: 10/1/2020 4:38:00 PM A very moving piece, Vijay. I really like the way you formed this. My favorite line, "Leaving behind part me to forever cheer your heart". :) Peace, Angie Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/2/2020 4:53:00 AM Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/1/2020 1:43:00 AM Your stunning metaphors are entrancing! They are dipped into a "sparkling and glamorous" charm of moon! An aura of romantic radiating with a heavenly beauty! You always ascend to higher possibilities of fine poetry, dear Vijay! So pleased to read your wonderful work! A win! My deepest regards and blessings. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/1/2020 5:08:00 AM So very kind of you my friend. Always a delight to read your comments. Much appreciate, Besma, as always. Many thanks. Regards.

Joanna Daniel Date: 10/1/2020 12:27:00 AM Magical and mesmerising poetry, Vijay:) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/1/2020 5:06:00 AM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman Date: 9/30/2020 9:18:00 PM Beautiful heart warming poetry. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/1/2020 5:06:00 AM Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole Date: 9/30/2020 2:27:00 PM The moon is magical within this photo, as the water moves slowly. Your thoughts create such a beautiful mood. Romantic, soft and sensual. Simply breathtaking my dear friend. Once again, your words caress my being, in such a wonderful way. :) Brandy Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/1/2020 10:15:00 AM Such a beautiful thought. This belongs in a poem somewhere. Vijay Pandit Date: 9/30/2020 3:34:00 PM To me it is a lonesome star visiting earth at the invitation of human admirer while the moon and other stars above enlighten the sky. Much appreciate your comments my dear friend. Always a joy when you visit. Many thanks, Brandy.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/30/2020 1:42:00 PM I send you a rose of friendship scent, for this beautiful romantic write dear Vij, always your fervent reader here. Thankyou Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/30/2020 3:30:00 PM Much appreciate your rose of friendship, Vienna. Always a pleasure--many thanks my friend.

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/30/2020 10:20:00 AM Very well composed Vijay, your romantic quill is aflame. Good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/30/2020 11:08:00 AM Thank you Tom. Much appreciate, as always.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/30/2020 8:45:00 AM What I admire most in this special poem is that every word has its proper place, enticing with allure and love. Luck with a highest placing. ~~ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/30/2020 11:08:00 AM So very kind of you, Victor. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy Date: 9/30/2020 8:19:00 AM Another brilliantly vivid, moving masterpiece, Vijay. Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/30/2020 11:07:00 AM Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/30/2020 7:17:00 AM - Beautiful, warm and romantic Vijay - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/30/2020 7:46:00 AM . You are so very kind. Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/30/2020 6:06:00 AM A beautiful vision of inspiration that soothes and caresses the spirit. I enjoyed it so much. God bless you, my dear friend Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/30/2020 7:45:00 AM Much appreciate, Gina--many thanks for your kind remarks.