F a M O U S For W-H-A-T

“I wear the chain I forged in life,” replied the ghost,
“I made it link by link, and yard by yard; I girded it on
of my own free will, and of my own free will I wore it.”

— Marley in Charles Dickens, A Christmas Carol




“Why is the rum gone?”

“True enough, the compass does not point North…
it points to the thing you want most in the world”

— Jack Sparrow, Pirates of the Caribbean





f a m o u s for w-h-a-t



what’s friendship, when famous —

drip drip drip of diamonds
gold that clamors and clangs

      like a Marley ghost

(the knockers froth)

a revolving door, an arrow
          North
West
                    East
           South

Cupid’s conundrum—
a whirring compass,
C-a-p-t-a-i-n Sparrow’s

birds spinning on a clothesline
dropping sans five and dime
w-a-s-t-i-n-g your time

in a party b-u-s  t
white powder
angel dust

silk stockings posing on seats
                    s-m-e-l-l-s of feet

hair tossed like a Caesar salad
jaded olives, glitter dressing

and who w-o-n your underpants

nothing left underneath…



11/26/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/27/2019 5:52:00 PM
Love it. Such stunning imagery and pointed slams at what ultimately comes to nothingness, ala 'Paris Hiltonism.' Thanks, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2019 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! Sad life some live...for nought
Date: 11/26/2019 1:05:00 PM
Hi Kim well done. ingenious thoughts Thanks for sharing this
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2019 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, Greg!
Date: 11/26/2019 12:08:00 PM
Wow, this one just really blew me away. I love the creativity in this and the abstract paring of these two fictional characters along with everything else you have tossed in here...even the underpants someone won. Too much, too cool, very Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2019 6:01:00 AM
Thank you so much! So much in this brain of mine :)
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