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Eyes Up Telescope Dark Matter Light

I just got a Telescope And all i seen when i looked in it was Dark Matter Tilll someone Shouted If you want to try looking smart How about Why don't you Try removing the Lens Cap And you may just see the light

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David Kavanagh

Date: 11/20/2021 12:57:00 PM

I think I see a deeper meaning here Christopher, not sure it’s your intention, but if humanity wants to see the bigger picture, we must look at life without blinkers, by not observing in the orthodox generic way, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/21/2021 3:16:00 PM

Cheers David Sir Never a truer word ssid. I neven even contemplated that thought but you know what after reading your comment and the poem back again. That does make perfect sense although like you said was not my initial intention