Eyes Through Eyes

He says my eyes are pretty
   but now I am confused
  'cause' pretty things are petty
   only picked up to be used.
And though my eyes do seem
   to take in all his gleam
 I can not help the wonder
   seeing self in ways unseen.
  If but myself I am not me
      the anti-opi-destiny
  to fear outside while inside
      I do hide and time bide
  to see myself in but a mirror
made of see through glass
  such a fusion of my feelings
      make I such an intelligent ass
  even to the bone is thrown 
      by sign of hot or cold
   my emotions and what seems to be
        unspoken, ohh so bold
                       but
As the ice grows and movement slows
   The warmth is there to match,
      melting, freezing
    to this perfect system 
      someone please open a hatch
  let some inward wind blow
      let some come that I'll know
                           Look, to you I do go
Without vain, and with trust
   look to me with more than lust
      but longing for the care that's there
   if not in your eyes, to your surprise, from someone else's eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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June 19, 2010 at 6:32 AM
Wonderful poetry Shannon, I do it gets more comments as it's a well written piece >> James
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