Eyes of This Poet

Endless everyday life, and memories of
Yester-year keep this poetic
Entrepreneur
Secure in his ambitions

Opinions on true life scenarios, not of
Fallacies

The teachings of a past muse, from
Heated sexual acts and
Inspirational poetry sessions
Seperate him from ordinary

Perceptive, his eyes scan and 
Organize life. He brings forth a surreal
Essence. A non-medicinal
Therapuetic incantation



........Double Acrostic.........:JP)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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La France Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Well down Jared, you have given us a very good example to inspire us~ I hope I can do one as well~ I will try very hard ~~~~
Neels Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Interesting write Jared, glad I searched for it lol
Kendrick Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Interesting write in the Acrostic form....Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for the honor of being chosen in the Sestina competition...I know that it is hard to choose a winner with so many writing such good writes...Sara
Alldredge Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Hello Jared, I've been reading your work every chance I've got. I do believe this is my favorite. I also would like to Thank You for your coments on my work.
Chircop Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 1:45 PM
LOVE THE EYES OF THE POET--:)cHARMA
Fraser Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 12:32 PM
Super Jared, no others words>>James
Orozco Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:43 PM
Amazing piece- eddie
Strand Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 12:57 AM
Very clever Jared a difficult form to write.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Have a good vacation
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 4:25 AM
Jared, Awesome. I love it. Love, Carol
Scoville Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 11:46 PM
Very well done...
Devonshire Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 7:25 PM
Amazing Acrostic, Jared. I like the way the past influences the poet. He will always be "separate...from ordinary." Very well written! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 10:19 AM
That first stanza, in this poem is rather catching, Jared. Sort of glues the mind to the rest of the poem! Good job, my friend! Godly love, Moses!
Huggins Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 10:07 AM
aww! i love this!!.....Sabrina
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