Eyes of This Poet

Endless everyday life, and memories of
Yester-year keep this poetic
Entrepreneur
Secure in his ambitions

Opinions on true life scenarios, not of
Fallacies

The teachings of a past muse, from
Heated sexual acts and
Inspirational poetry sessions
Seperate him from ordinary

Perceptive, his eyes scan and 
Organize life. He brings forth a surreal
Essence. A non-medicinal
Therapuetic incantation



........Double Acrostic.........:JP)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 8/5/2010 2:40:00 PM
Well down Jared, you have given us a very good example to inspire us~ I hope I can do one as well~ I will try very hard ~~~~
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Date: 8/5/2010 10:35:00 AM
Interesting write Jared, glad I searched for it lol
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Date: 5/18/2010 10:27:00 AM
Interesting write in the Acrostic form....Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for the honor of being chosen in the Sestina competition...I know that it is hard to choose a winner with so many writing such good writes...Sara
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Date: 2/17/2010 4:53:00 AM
Hello Jared, I've been reading your work every chance I've got. I do believe this is my favorite. I also would like to Thank You for your coments on my work.
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Date: 11/7/2009 1:45:00 PM
LOVE THE EYES OF THE POET--:)cHARMA
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Date: 8/27/2009 12:32:00 PM
Super Jared, no others words>>James
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Date: 8/10/2009 2:43:00 PM
Amazing piece- eddie
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Date: 7/26/2009 12:57:00 AM
Very clever Jared a difficult form to write.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Have a good vacation
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Date: 7/22/2009 4:25:00 AM
Jared, Awesome. I love it. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2009 11:46:00 PM
Very well done...
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Date: 7/21/2009 7:25:00 PM
Amazing Acrostic, Jared. I like the way the past influences the poet. He will always be "separate...from ordinary." Very well written! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:19:00 AM
That first stanza, in this poem is rather catching, Jared. Sort of glues the mind to the rest of the poem! Good job, my friend! Godly love, Moses!
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:07:00 AM
aww! i love this!!.....Sabrina
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