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Eyes The mouth can speak sweet words or lies with profundity, deep and strong. But when you look straight in the eyes, there's a truth that is never wrong. Lovely words are "hocus pocus" when the eyes are glancing down.. They need to look up and focus on your two greens, blacks or browns. Adoring clichés are spoken to many a cherished, won prize. Yet true love leaves hearts unbroken, and begins in the lover's eyes. 7/12/17

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/13/2017 12:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Janis, with this awesome write:)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/17/2017 4:12:00 PM

Thanks, Jo.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/12/2017 8:43:00 PM

Congratulations Janis :)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/17/2017 4:12:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/12/2017 5:24:00 PM

Janis, great poem, congratulations on your win..... ~*

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/17/2017 4:13:00 PM

Thanks for your comments Eve.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/12/2017 4:54:00 PM

So true Janis. This is a great entry! I bet Daniel struggled to choose the winners. Congratulations on your fine win! ; )

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/17/2017 4:14:00 PM

Thanks so much Connie. your comments are always encouraging.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2017 3:18:00 PM

Janis, I think you and I were writing very close thematically. I really like this and am glad to see you got on the list. Congrats

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/17/2017 4:15:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

White Wolf

Date: 7/12/2017 12:56:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Janis, well done

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:09:00 PM

Thanks, White Wolf.

John Hamilton

Date: 7/12/2017 12:13:00 PM

Congrats on placing in this tough to judge contest!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:09:00 PM

Thanks, John.

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/12/2017 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations Janis, your poem is filled with wisdom

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:10:00 PM

Thanks.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/12/2017 10:45:00 AM

Congrats!!! Janis...very well executed my friend...^WW^

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:11:00 PM

Appreciate your comments. Thanks.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/12/2017 10:19:00 AM

Congratulations Janis on your placement in my contest. I loved the first stanza in this sonnet and the final couplet. No shame here, as all entries were superb! Thank you for your participation and your wonderful entry.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/12/2017 3:12:00 PM

Great contest. Thanks, Daniel.