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Eyes

I can't take it all on I am blind everyday i know i am blind and knowing i cant see my future is my sixth sense and here you are foreshadowing trying to take it away from me i do not play that game I am one person action for reaction in metaphor, to inspire the perfect metaphorical story to read with the perfect metaphors on screen from a book about real live things I cant take it all on I am many parts formless and of form focusless and concentrated multitasking working on figuring out my own desire of sex and diamond

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Date: 2/22/2010 12:15:00 PM
very interesting write. enjoyed your poem. what tree did my poem remind you of? I have a Van Gothe print of a tree that reminds me of my back yard in Denver, the poem you read was about trees in winter backhome in South Carolina. Have you read Gary's Eyes? Ellen
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