Eyes

The Sun will rise
a high command,
God’s firm detailing -- 
Moon will carry-on
then night, 
a borrower of light;
up-close we have
our planet near star
imagine worlds each
distant gleaming…
trillions of eyes
attempting to look-in

while our own eyes
far away dreaming
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Date: 5/1/2025 3:29:00 PM
Hello Joe DiMkino, I enjoyed this poem. I will make it my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/2/2025 10:25:00 AM
Hello Joe Dimino, I am gad I brightened your day. I will enjoy my writing day. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/2/2025 3:58:00 AM
You made my day! Thank you, Darlene. Have a wonderful writing day! Blessings.
Date: 5/1/2025 9:14:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Eyes" write. Now it is dream time... Have a wonderful day writing away...........
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/2/2025 3:59:00 AM
Dreams can be highlight of the day as well as night. Dream on!! Thank you, Paula.
Date: 5/1/2025 7:53:00 AM
- Lovely, Joe ... close your eyes and dream :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/2/2025 4:00:00 AM
Hugs, Anne; thank you. Dreams can be a blessing. Everything starts with a vision.
Date: 5/1/2025 7:19:00 AM
Ah this resonates as sometimes i see all that as an observant lover of nature! I especially love the lines “ Moon will carry-on then night, a borrower of light;” so dreamy and soulful! “while our own eyes far away dreaming” stunning ending! Pleasure reading this gem! What we see all around little things somedays we appreciate a little more and worthy of accolades! Sending you light
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/2/2025 4:02:00 AM
Yep...little things mean a lot, as the song goes. Little kindnesses, a well placed supporting word...they add up. Thank you, my friend. Blessings.
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