Jan Allison Poet Free verse

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Eye'Ll See You Again - Visual 4

Sad aqua blue eyes
Swimming in an ocean of tears

Sweetheart, I’m drowning and I can’t swim  …

Return my love 
And save me

Contest:-Through your Eyes. Nette Onclaud
Visual 4
23 words used
Jan Allison
13th June 2015

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Eve Roper July 5, 2015 at 1:35 PM Beautiful write, Jan, a7. Hugs Eve Jan Allison July 5, 2015 at 1:43 PM Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mohn June 22, 2015 at 9:44 PM Nicely written and unique Jan...congrats to you! Jan Allison June 23, 2015 at 12:59 AM Thanks David I'm glad you liked it:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. June 22, 2015 at 5:57 PM Hi Jan, here I am again to congratulate you on your win:)Alexis Jan Allison June 23, 2015 at 12:59 AM Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A June 22, 2015 at 4:40 PM Jan:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT Jan Allison June 23, 2015 at 12:58 AM Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2015 at 3:47 PM nice win. PD Jan Allison June 22, 2015 at 3:51 PM Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi June 22, 2015 at 1:43 PM HI Jan: Congratulations on a flowing poem! Jan Allison June 22, 2015 at 2:09 PM Thanks Ralph - the image is so so wonderful I had to go with this visual:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton June 22, 2015 at 2:56 AM good take Jan congrats on placing hugs Jan Allison June 22, 2015 at 11:37 AM Thanks Shadow:-) Hugs jan xx

M.N.I.W M.N.I.W June 21, 2015 at 11:17 PM Congratulations on your poem. Jan Allison June 22, 2015 at 1:11 AM Thanks so much:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser June 21, 2015 at 10:21 PM Beautiful words, these, Jan! Congrats :) Jan Allison June 22, 2015 at 1:11 AM Thanks Laura:-) Hugs Jan xx

Francine Roberts June 21, 2015 at 9:11 PM sweet piece Jan, many congrats on your win Jan Allison June 22, 2015 at 1:10 AM Thanks Francine:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 21, 2015 at 7:13 PM hey, it looks like I never even saw this one before. BIG congrats, Jan. You are doing great with wins this week! Jan Allison June 22, 2015 at 1:04 AM Not doing bad for someone who writes poop poetry lol:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France June 21, 2015 at 5:24 PM Jan, a big congratulations to you on your placement with this beautiful write and thanks for visiting my poem, decay Jan Allison June 22, 2015 at 1:03 AM Thanks Broken Wings:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus June 21, 2015 at 5:20 PM Found your name once again on the winners' list, Jan!! Congratulations!! hugs // paul Jan Allison June 22, 2015 at 1:03 AM Thanks Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May June 21, 2015 at 5:19 PM Congrats on a fine win Jan Jan Allison June 22, 2015 at 1:02 AM Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser June 15, 2015 at 3:10 PM Love the blues amidst the hue, always save your loved one show love is true. Winners podium it shall be, deservedly, hugs // James xx Jan Allison June 15, 2015 at 3:17 PM Thanks James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Suzanne Delaney June 14, 2015 at 12:47 PM great write on this visual, Jan: How did you get the picture there? I wish I knew how to do that. I am looking for the poop on that ....lol Can you Soupy me with some short instructions if you have time? Hugs, SuZ Jan Allison June 14, 2015 at 2:00 PM Thanks for dropping by with your lovely comment:-) soupmail:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux June 14, 2015 at 8:56 AM When you have a chance check out our group poem, it is now finished. Jan Allison June 14, 2015 at 1:59 PM oh fab will do:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux June 14, 2015 at 8:55 AM I enjoyed seeing this through your eyes. Jan Allison June 14, 2015 at 1:59 PM Thanks for the lovely comment - Oh I wish my eyes were as stunning as those in the image Richard:-)Hugs Jan xx

Skat A June 13, 2015 at 6:54 PM wow! skat Jan Allison June 14, 2015 at 7:59 AM Thanks Skat I take that as a WOW comment lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus June 13, 2015 at 6:02 PM How lovely, albeit so sad!! Who could not answer to such a heartfelt plea! Hugs // paul Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 6:21 PM Thanks Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison June 13, 2015 at 5:28 PM How could your sweetheart ignore your plaintiff cry!!! Good one for the contest, dear Jan! Hugs, Jack xxx Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 6:20 PM Thanks Jack:-) hugs Jan xxx

Constance La France June 13, 2015 at 4:50 PM Jan, beautifully penned, it is magical with that image, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, summer memory Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 4:52 PM The image jumped out at me as soon as I saw it - it is so stunning:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick June 13, 2015 at 4:05 PM Very emotive and descriptive of the picture..Great work..I am impressed..Thanks for stopping by ..Sara Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 4:06 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Francine Roberts June 13, 2015 at 3:06 PM best of luck in the contest , lovely piece Jan Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 3:59 PM Thanks Francine lovely to see you back on soup:-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos June 13, 2015 at 1:29 PM that's so deep that the ocean of tears must be infinity....Enjoyed immensely...thank you Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 3:58 PM Thanks so much for your support Judy:-) hugs jan xx

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