Eileen Manassian Poet Epic

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Eye Power- a Collab With Justin

You possess me with those eyes of pyromania
a tidal wave of temptation thrashing into my need for euphoria
romanticized on appetite for agile reckoning of kiss ravishing, harnessing my hysteria,
plumed with lashes lent from love's wings, curling wet wishing
brows preened sexy mean, fur strip stiring me,
hypnotized by your hot umber rings
I learn how suspense stings
circles of crave unbuckling my brazen brandishing, 
deep set on my desire I'm unraveling for the vixen fire, heart sweating,
born from the brown of beauty's sweetest warmth
eyes that bite and suck the stress
right out of my soul's duress,
for you I go forth...

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You possess me with those eyes of eagle blue
you use a single glance my hesitancy to unglue
soaring in the sky of my sweetened fantasy
these blue crystal orbs foretell of ecstasy

But first...the hunt...looking for prey - it's true
it's you - the Eagle
brutally brave and fiercely famished
you glide on the wind of my desire
your wings ablaze with fire
your eyes fierce, Oh, how they pierce
again and again
my inner sanctum deep
their hue puts the sky to shame
demanding passion and cravings untame
they bore deep into me
slashing bonds of inhibition free
Our eyes speak
Brown and Blue
Me and You...
in your eyes the need to seize
in mine, the need to please
yours dominate
mine capitulate
yours subjugate
mine consummate,
your eyes speak...
mine respond...Bonded, we belong
Eagle and Dove
poetry love
Our eyes speak...

A Collaboration Made From The Quills Of Justin & Eileen

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 25, 2015 at 3:30 AM Wow, the eagle and dove soar!! An amazing poem by two passionate souls...you write with two hearts beating as one!

Richard Lamoureux January 24, 2015 at 12:52 PM Thanks for your comment on my "Better" poem, you made my day. Hugs Rick! Eileen Manassian January 24, 2015 at 1:05 PM I'm glad. You've made my day many a time..... :)

Justin Bordner January 24, 2015 at 1:44 AM You are a Dove of glorious beauty, with eyes of pure passion and wings of resilient grace...Our combined ink glistens with wild taste Eileen...and that picture to match our poem speaks of true partnership...I love it! I am honored to dance Quills with you...Justin Eileen Manassian January 24, 2015 at 11:03 AM So very often...you have been the wind beneath my wings with your words of encouragement. :) Our combined ink does glisten...I knew you'd like the picture. I know your tastes well. Dancing quills with you has been a sheer delight and pleasure. XO

Laura Breidenthal January 23, 2015 at 4:49 PM Two of my favorite poets collabing...I'm in for a treat! ...reading.... Ah gee, where do I begin. Fascinating unity with the strength of passion...I love this: ""in your eyes the need to seize in mine, the need to please" Eagle and Dove personified by some beautiful, clever people. I am a big fan of you both. Love you guys! Always, Laura Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 10:16 PM Thank you, Laura, for this kind sweet comment. I'm touched by your gracious words. I've always seen Justin as an Eagle...flying high...flying free...There is a strength to his heart that I admire. I'm just pleased that he accepted to collab with me. I find his words...fascinating. :) I appreciate your visit, dear. Hugs

Poesy Relish January 23, 2015 at 4:02 PM A wonderful collaboration... love the imagery... a bond between an eagle and a dove... a daring act by the dove and being in a state of hypnosis... great imaginatio ...#7... goes intk my favs list ...love,nad! Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 10:18 PM Thank you, Nadiya. Poetry is all about living above and beyond the here and now and seeing ideal beauty. This has a touch of that in it. I love having Justin's name on my page as a co-author. :) I have collaborated with several here on the Soup. Very satisfying experience, indeed.

Paul Callus January 23, 2015 at 11:59 AM A dream come true....the eagle and the dove fly in harmony on wings of passion and desire. This works excellently in free verse....no ties or strings to inhibit free expression. Well done to both of you, Justin and Eileen, you compliment each other effortlessly; no dips in the graph...just a continuous upward curve. This is going into my favs! // paul Paul Callus January 23, 2015 at 2:25 PM :) Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 12:11 PM Paul...I was so thrilled when you chose to follow my lead and write about something passionate. That piece I something I will always treasure! :) I love dwelling on this theme. It's the lens through which I view life. I loved our collaboration....in rhyme. Justin and I free fell on this one. I love his ability to express himself with no fear of what people think. His language is very...raw and real. No euphemisms. I'm drawn to his work and to him as a person. I've found him to be a very kind and compassionate person as well. I do wish him every good thing in life....He deserves to have that larger than life quality living. Thanks for the visit, my dear. I can always open up to you. :) You are so kind and good to me. I look forward to writing again with you. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux January 23, 2015 at 10:16 AM The Prince and Queen of passionate pens have demonstrated their wondorous skills. I am beyond impressed. Magnificent! This is such a treat to read something from the two of you. Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 11:43 AM Wow, thank you, Richard. You gave me a title I will always treasure. Justin does well in the passion domain as well. :) I'm just a little peeved because someone rated this a 6.40....I know it's not you, but it does have me a little upset. Oh well....the opinions that matter...are here to make me happy. Yours a precious vote of confidence, Richard. Hugs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 23, 2015 at 9:21 AM eyes of pyromania, irresistible read. Wow Wondera/Justin . Best wishes Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 11:45 AM I'm glad you visited, Rajat, and left your best wishes. It was a great experience working with Justin. I feel free and able to express myself without fear of judgment or recrimination....it's a glorious feeling. Thanks for stopping by.

Emile Pinet January 23, 2015 at 9:00 AM Imaginative wizardry with the pen. Emile. Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 11:45 AM Thank you, Emile. I hope that you were enchanted by this wizardry.

Ayesha Karim January 23, 2015 at 8:46 AM This is a powerful poem about what is said and what is unsaid between two lovers. Good job! Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 11:47 AM Thank you for your visit to my work, Ayesha. I was glad that Justin accepted to collaborate with me. I think that our words flow well together...

David Meade January 23, 2015 at 8:05 AM A powerful image contrast between the eagle and the dove -- I saw both fly with grace and wonder upon the wind -- the eagle soaring and diving, the dove dancing and darting . . . such were your words upon my heart! 7 Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 11:53 AM David...I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery here. I've given Justin the title Eagle quite some time ago...Eagle and Gladiator....somehow these two titles just suit my image of him so well. There is a rawness and strength in his writes...He isn't afraid to pull out all the stops and let his inner thoughts ooze on the page. I admire that. I chose to be a dove for this piece....I'm not always dove like. There is a fierceness in my soul that I often have to keep subdued. It's sad....but that is life. Thanks for the visit. You know every one is precious.

Charmaine Chircop January 23, 2015 at 7:41 AM Wow!!!both of you... WoW!!!A big favourite!!: ) Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 11:54 AM Thanks, sweetie. This has been a dream come true. :) I'm honored to write with Justin.

Demetrios Trifiatis January 23, 2015 at 6:44 AM Titanic clash of verses with poetry the winner! A seven to both, Eileen and Justin, Justin and Eileen! Bravo! Eileen Manassian January 23, 2015 at 11:56 AM We both love to write of passion, my dear poet. Passion and romance are wondrous themes. I was really hoping you would read and comment on the poem before this one. The one of the REAL Valentine story...Scars of Love. Please promise me you will read that and give me your input. I'm very anxious to know your thoughts. You know your opinion of me and my work are precious to my heart. Kindly, take the time to read it. I would be grateful.