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April -6- 2026

Eye of the Eye Poetry Contest

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Eye of the Eye

Line of inquiry: 
What is that awareness by which each body-mind feels alive and becomes aware? 


Eyesight is an invaluable gift enjoyed by all
But with external eyes, everything, we can’t see
We need the eye of the eye to perceive things right
A beacon to guide our vessel through the turbulent sea

Blessed are we who have eyes to see and senses to feel.
When external sight dims and blurs in veils of mist,
Something that resides within our outer frame
Makes us feel alive, a beacon shining bright.

When our inner eye stays closed or is dim with cataract, 
Unclouded sight is that which we often miss
Knowledge when aligned to wisdom lends us sight
And roots the spirit in abiding peace and bliss

Wisdom lends us prudence in the use of words 
It prefers the hush where truth can breathe
Sometimes speech is like thunder alarming to ears
While silence remains like dagger inside the sheath 

Joy or sorrow, heeding no consent, arrives unbidden,
Yet within us remains a guarded spiritual realm
That teaches us to respond with reason rather than reflex
And see things in clearer light without reactions, extreme.

It teaches us to weather loss without disgust
And relish success without strutting around
Awareness is the light that guides us through the maze
And is born where sight is clear and choice sound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 10:26 PM
Wise, beautifully written, Valsa <3
Proxenos Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 11:03 AM
As Victor says, spiritual awareness and inner wisdom guides us, - the inner eye - with me starts with butterflies in my tummy, the feeling creeping upwards to my chest and finally my throat, choking me if I DONT TELL WHAT I feel is true. Hugs, Jennifer.
Jones Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 6:41 AM
A wonderful thought provoking read! I especially liked the wisdom and insight in your words most!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 3:11 AM
The concept of spiritual awareness and inner wisdom as essential guides for navigating life. True perception comes from an "inner eye". Ultimately, this awareness acts as a beacon, guiding the soul through the "turbulent sea" and "maze" of existence. Best for a win.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 6:02 AM
written with depth and insight and in your beautiful, indomitable style. Seems as if 'grace' flows from your words and your spirt. hugs, Sara
Salehi Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 10:25 PM
Ask, listen, trust, and follow…
Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 10:25 AM
Some good thoughts penned in this contest entry. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. If only we all could have wisdom in all our decisions, and we can have much more wisdom by prayer. Sara K
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