Extravagant Love

Why do they come to call
Those men who lack in passion
Why do they bother at all
If their blazing fire be rationed

So piercing so radiant
The fumbling for words
An intimate clumsy rhythm
Lyrics sweet melody unheard 

Captivate my heart with exaggerated life
Like a summer wind playing in my hair
Sunlight dancing in your eyes ever bright
Monotony oh mediocrity please forebear

Love me with extravagance
Not dreary sunless hues
Fill your praise with eloquence
My famished femininity perused 

Must I plead for security
If I fall to worship at your sight
Do not evoke my immunity
The mystery of me begs to ignite

Embrace my pain 
Soothe my soul
Your longings I'll claim
No thing shall I withhold

Bid me not my heart surrender
If by time my countenance shall fall
For a lie is still a lie though delivered tender
While dreams denied the living a nightmare to all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/2/2014 12:48:00 PM
What a beautiful poem! I have to visit more often :)
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Date: 12/5/2013 8:25:00 AM
This was a beautiful first offering. You have skills!
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Date: 10/27/2013 10:29:00 AM
Sarai, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/28/2013 12:24:00 AM
Linda, thank you. Everyone here is so incredibly talented, I'm truly humbled by this. Hugs
Date: 10/27/2013 1:25:00 AM
Sarai, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT <3
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/28/2013 12:22:00 AM
Thank you SKAT....I am honored and humbled
Date: 10/22/2013 3:26:00 AM
Excellent write! Great job.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/24/2013 2:12:00 AM
So appreciate your encouragement, thank you!
Date: 10/9/2013 12:32:00 PM
amazing beautiful piece flowed of the page golden
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/24/2013 2:11:00 AM
Thank you my friend
Date: 10/9/2013 9:54:00 AM
"Must I plead for security, if I fall to worship at your sight"? What a powerful line. Another incredible piece.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/9/2013 12:11:00 PM
Thank you again for your compliments. Please always feel free to critique my work, it makes us better writers. Have a beautiful day and may you be inspired!
Date: 10/8/2013 7:18:00 PM
Sarai, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/9/2013 12:04:00 PM
Hello SKAT, so nice to meet you! Thank you for the warm welcome.
Date: 10/8/2013 1:04:00 PM
This is an amazing view of who you are and what you want and what you deserve!!! You humble me with your heart and your clarity of what it is. Simply amazing........
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/9/2013 12:00:00 PM
A humble thank you
Date: 10/7/2013 6:32:00 AM
Sarai,I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/9/2013 11:58:00 AM
Thank you for your warm welcome Linda, drama and love... What every girl hungers for !
Date: 10/7/2013 5:50:00 AM
A good poem with a grand style and wonderful expression. Kudos! Thanks for your wonderful compliment. Baron Of Ebullion
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/9/2013 11:57:00 AM
Absolutely my friend. I can't get enough of your writing. Have a wonderful day!
Date: 10/7/2013 4:09:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Sarai ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/9/2013 11:54:00 AM
Thank you sweetheart. I have already connected with so many wonderful and talented new friends here.
Date: 10/7/2013 4:00:00 AM
Well written and nicely expressed. Love your style and choice of words. Welcome to poetry soup,this a family you can call your own. Wishing you the best. Baron Of Ebullion
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Sarai Virden
Date: 10/9/2013 11:51:00 AM
Thank you for welcoming me, I so appreciate feedback.
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