Extraterrestrial Lover

You may not believe this
but my last lover
was an extraterrestrial
which caused me great distress
the way she transformed me
her out of this world dress.

She brings winter with her overnight
pseudo-snow fell rocket high
a siren unlike all the other girls
a pleasing form to my human eyes
making love underneath force field
captivating planetarium starlit skies.

Kisses of rapture times warp speed
circling around the rings of Saturn
I will follow her to the end of the galaxy
my lips locked to hers, I love her
beam me up my darling and kiss me
my lovely and beautiful femalien...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Melugin Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 8:08 PM
Ken....You create words that shine like stars......7 that is! With a force field like that..... there will be no breaking up! Can I borrow one of your pens??? chuck
Carroll Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 8:11 PM
Thank you Chuck.. Ken
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December 29, 2013 at 12:54 PM
Ha ha, does Beaming you up replace the need for Viagra? And once beamed up is there any danger after 4 hours?
Carroll Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Hi Richard, Only if one takes nitrates..lol Thanks for the visit my friend.. Ken
Mcdaid Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 12:34 PM
excellently penned ken dear friend happy new year
Carroll Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 12:50 PM
Thank you Liam.. Ken
Williams Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 11:27 AM
Ken love is love in whatever form it comes….David
Carroll Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 1:09 PM
Thanks David! Ken
Horsman Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 10:26 AM
what a wonderful and very cleverly written poem,,,,truly enjoyed this....
Carroll Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 1:09 PM
Thank you Harry! Keb
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December 28, 2013 at 8:48 AM
- Sweet and romantic Ken! - Like it very much :)) - Wish you all the best for the new year 2014 !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carroll Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 8:49 AM
Hi Anne, Thank you!
Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Cute one ...Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this one today..A laugh a day is good medicine..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Carroll Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 8:46 AM
Thank you Sara.. Ken
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