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Extra Fries

Aha! Exercise... I thought you said extra fries!
Rather have extra fries, but can cause larger thighs
So I must conform
To which I'm lukewarm
Must pay attention or cause my premature demise

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Lim'Rik Flats

August 3, 2017 at 8:40 AM

Give me a french fry that's real//And still wearing a bit of the peel//Not that fast-food crap//(it's nuclear waste, wrapped)//And its only resemblance to food is the spiel! THIGH ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison

August 3, 2017 at 8:49 AM

MacDonald's fries... YUCKY-POO! In fact on my current weight loss program, fries are strictly a no-no!!! GOOD MORNING JOHN JOHN!!!

Russell Sivey

August 3, 2017 at 7:12 AM

Yes, we don't want a premature demise my friend! You have written another fabulous write here Jack! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem, so full of folly and redemption (extra fries to exercise)! Such an awesome piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison

August 3, 2017 at 7:20 AM

Glad you liked it, my friend! Silly eh? HAVE A GOOD DAY DEAR FRIEND!!!