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Extra Fries

Aha! Exercise... I thought you said extra fries! Rather have extra fries, but can cause larger thighs So I must conform To which I'm lukewarm Must pay attention or cause my premature demise

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/3/2017 8:40:00 AM

Give me a french fry that's real//And still wearing a bit of the peel//Not that fast-food crap//(it's nuclear waste, wrapped)//And its only resemblance to food is the spiel! THIGH ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/3/2017 8:49:00 AM

MacDonald's fries... YUCKY-POO! In fact on my current weight loss program, fries are strictly a no-no!!! GOOD MORNING JOHN JOHN!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/3/2017 7:12:00 AM

Yes, we don't want a premature demise my friend! You have written another fabulous write here Jack! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem, so full of folly and redemption (extra fries to exercise)! Such an awesome piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/3/2017 7:20:00 AM

Glad you liked it, my friend! Silly eh? HAVE A GOOD DAY DEAR FRIEND!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/3/2017 7:11:00 AM

I' so there... ;) Good morning Jack! xomo!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/3/2017 7:18:00 AM

Hi Miss Mo! Hope your day is filled with happy! Love 'n hugs, Jack xxx