Extinguished

There is a broken soul living here...
Within these dusty off-white walls – 
There is a breathing ghost, with sputtering candles for eyes 
And a suit of slowly decaying flesh 
Clothing her splintered bones...
There is a terminal patient sitting here, 
On this ignominious chair, legs crossed, 
One foot dangling, toenails painted a hart’s blood red...
Her fingers tapping her death knell on the table, 
Dancing over the coffee stains...
There is a condemned inmate reclining here...
On the skids, savouring death row, 
She is courting her demise with the candour 
And low self esteem, of a seasoned flirt – 
With that deadened mask-like smile...
Her nerve endings blunted and firing off malfunctioning sparks
She has no hope – forgot the meaning of the word years ago
In its place lies a gentle coffin of mourning...
Resting where joy should be, in a dirt-filled hole, 
A grave for her sins...
And strewn on the fresh turned earth, her heart - 
An empty locket, scratched and tarnished by the claw-marks, 
By the spattered venom, of dead and dying loves...
Of her soul’s final throes, before the darkness flooded in – 
And blew out the tenuous flames 
Of those two guttering candles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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