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Extinctions Distinctions - For Contest

Extinctions Distinctions Will it end with one distinction - We – as authors of our own extinction. Sucking, vampire–like, the life essence necessary for our ongoing presence. Will it end with roar - or whimper warring beasts or broken souls flaming wrath of mindless death huddled fear of bridge-less trolls. Will the end come quickly – slowly sinner’s first and then - the holy God’s that failed to tend their flock reducing fertile earth – to rock. Will the end be one last breath uttering sad truth’s lament despite rumors to the contrary mankind wasn’t heaven sent. It will end – of course – but how in some future here and now unless the thoughts of our distinct-ness become the first that we extinguish. 12/30/2015 submitted to - Extinction – Poetry contest sponsor – Anthony Slausen

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Date: 1/15/2016 10:02:00 PM
JOHN, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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John Lawless
Date: 1/16/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Linda
Date: 1/7/2016 7:46:00 PM
Such a thoughtful poem should be our lesson to make the most of "today" and "now", to take care of what we have, and not carelessly throw it all away, ....but as creatures of habit, and fallible human beings, we hide our heads in the sand, and pretend the future is someone else's problem. What a thoughtful poem it is! Congratulations John !!
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John Lawless
Date: 1/16/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thank you Carrie for reading and commenting so nicely on this poem, your continuing support is appreciated.
Date: 1/7/2016 2:09:00 PM
Awesome win
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John Lawless
Date: 1/16/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 1/7/2016 12:54:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, John!
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John Lawless
Date: 1/16/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting Baleen
Date: 12/31/2015 9:45:00 PM
Interesting though sad perspective on the origin/purpose/end of humanity. We may be on the opposite ends of spectrum, but I have plenty of respect for your poetry, and the talent you have for expressing your beliefs. Hi John! Here today just to read/reply and visit some. Wishing you the best this holiday season and greater things in 2016! Kim
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John Lawless
Date: 1/16/2016 9:07:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment Kim, always appreciated.
Date: 12/31/2015 5:54:00 PM
beautiful...and great if I will say
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John Lawless
Date: 1/16/2016 9:06:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment

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