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not one easy way out so how come i see two a dilemma in cloak could be doubt total eclipse? an asteroid hiding in smoke? sky rips kaboom then the earth broke doom not one easy way out an asteroid hiding in smoke doom

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Date: 8/8/2024 2:30:00 PM
A Kavanagh theory on world extinction. Not another big bang theory. Oh no... this one is much more horrendous. It's called the Kaboom of Doom! Quite a dilemma we're in for. LOL Seriously great Minichu.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/8/2024 3:00:00 PM
Heya Lin! the earth has had two major extinction events in prehistory, the first one almost done the job, the second done the dinosaurs, and paved the way for us, next one we may just have the technology to deflect it, if like Tom says some lunatic doesn’t blow us all up first, I only do a kaboom of doom with poetic license! Cheers David
Date: 8/8/2024 8:21:00 AM
Quite the dilemma indeed, should get top score just for kabooming the world! I have the rules on my dilemma minuchi, i've done so many love them. See mine. Or here...Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD see the b's, what I want to know is why some are capitalized? shrug
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/8/2024 3:26:00 PM
I think doing it right made it even more dynamic!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/8/2024 3:16:00 PM
so is the name!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/8/2024 3:02:00 PM
These are very tricky :)
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/8/2024 12:38:00 PM
lol. glad to assist. Wasn't as easy as you thought, hugh?
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/8/2024 11:09:00 AM
There you go I’ve destroyed the whole world again, but this time I’ve done it right, with your help, which makes you an accomplice lol! :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/8/2024 9:02:00 AM
Oh Sh!t, I best get working on this one and find another way of destroying the world lol! thanks for the heads up on the Bees, cheers David
Date: 8/7/2024 10:53:00 PM
Yikes, no need for asteroids though, some idiot closer to home will do that for us lol. Tom
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/8/2024 12:18:00 AM
I see the Ukrainians made a big statement this week they actually attacked and crossed the border into Russia, give Putin something to think about, cheers David
Date: 8/7/2024 1:52:00 PM
Thinking outside of the box for a great contest entry I see! Good luck David!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/7/2024 2:43:00 PM
Ps sorry for blowing up the world!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/7/2024 2:01:00 PM
Took a little bit of figuring out Karen, I’m delighted you think it will work for the contest, cheers David

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