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A drunk man stumbles out of any bar Looks at a sky marred with stars Inside looks he, a void he spys Tears brim fragmented eyes He feels it-- Bestowed burden cumbersome In the hands of man-- The brand, To think To be To become To not... Is him Is we

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Marty Owens

Date: 11/18/2009 1:50:00 PM

Hi Leighton, Enjoyed reading your poems today...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/17/2009 4:03:00 PM

Wonderful write with descriptive words ... could feel the pain.. if u are new to the Soup allow me to welcome u Leighton and look forward to reading your postings.. if u need any help there are many here who are willing to answer your questions and navigate u around the Soup site.. keep on writing and sharing... thankxxx and luv .. Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraodinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"