Exquisitely Played

exquisitely played
by the master. . . . 
my heart-strings snapped
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 10:54 PM
Lovely Andrea. Many congrats for this win.
A   Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 1:28 PM
ANDREA, , Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's "Single Senryu" contest. ~ :-) xox~ PD
Poet Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 6:54 AM
A great senryu here Andrea!Love this!Congrats on the win.Ref. to yasmin's comment below are blue eyed?
Ramage Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 9:28 PM
Yep, the master can do that at times. Well done, should have placed much higher. Congratulations on your win. Lee
Grisetti Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 6:02 PM
Splendid senryu - congratulations.
Arowolo Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 4:29 PM
Beautiful and awesome piece,Andrea...Great job...I hope it`s jazz...Congratulations on your well deserved win...
Ryerson Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 3:17 PM
A real beauty, Andrea....sounds like you're a music lover like me...would love to know the piece you referred too - Tim
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 1:26 PM
Congratulations Andy I do like this one its very clever xx
A   Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 3:58 PM
hello there sweet lady poet queen,, hi! see you don't care to check up on little old me..lol.. kidding i'll be back,, in later :-) by the way the real reason i'm here is to let you know????? guess????? where i'm at...lol.... OREGON... wow! this state need to be cleaned up here....ha ha! to many colorful leaves... And me and Nathan are doing just fine... we finally got to meet one another ;-) ;-) love the joy of life >;-) Nathan & I R smiling at all of you right now. bye,..p.d.
Babcock Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 12:41 PM
This is a master piece. Love it. Phyl
Walters Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 6:20 AM
Lovely, just lovely! Hugs, kris
Cwiak Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 2:28 AM
Must be a lot of "players" out there. Congrats, Andrea, on your win in the contest. Dan C
Mannan Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 9:19 PM
Wow what prcise wordings. many congratulations.
Horsman Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 6:33 AM
congrats with this fine winner. Harry
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:24 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 3:09 PM
Terrific shortie Andrea, beautifully written. What a contest this has been. Everyone a gem, many congratulations on your win >> James :)
Gorelick Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 3:06 PM
Ohh..I can relate Im afriad.. congrats dear on your fine win. BG
Muzzey Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 2:50 PM
A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl
Devonshire Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 2:04 PM
Great "play" on words, Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 1:26 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, Andrea
K. Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 12:35 PM
I knew this was gonna place wonderfully in Chris' contest--really enjoyed this one, a play on "play" haha- Congrats! hugs nikko :)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Congrats Andrea on your super win in the Senryu contest.. an awesome victory .. enjoy my friend with luv...
Roberts Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 10:25 AM
nice one, congrats on your win in the contest
La France Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 8:26 PM
Thanks for "commenting" on my "poetry" and this "senryu" is just "great" so best of "luck" in the Chris's contest ~~
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