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Mystic Rose's contest: A Rose in the Garden of Love~3/1/25

Exquisite Rose Among Others

Within a garden bower we spent hours,
enjoying conversation and then a slow dance.
A prelude that we knew would lead to romance.
There's a craving, a yearning in our eyes,
as if we're hypnotized by our amorous flirtation.
Our glances are sparked by smouldering embers,
remembrances of desired remnants of passion...
Flames of a fire that will burn until it's sated.

"You are the most exquisite rose among others,"
His words laid claim to my wanton heart
as he softly whispered them into my ear. 
There's a harvest of love we've yet to reap,
ignited tonight in this garden of love.
Deep and lonely have been our nights,
blighted from a season of cold and empty arms.
Together again, this time we'll not let go.
The longing is now fulfilled with belonging.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 3/4/2025 11:36:00 AM
What a beautiful rose write and pretty picture. Love your line, "You are the most exquisite rose among others," Enjoy your day with roses and blessings..................
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/4/2025 12:04:00 PM
Thank you for your comments on my poetry today, Paula. I appreciate each and every one.
Date: 3/2/2025 9:35:00 AM
Love the romance in this Lin. beautiful entry to the contest. :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/4/2025 12:04:00 PM
Thanks ever so much for commenting, Linda.
Date: 3/1/2025 5:01:00 PM
so lovely and romantic, merci poet
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2025 5:16:00 PM
Je vous en prie, Yann.
Date: 3/1/2025 7:44:00 AM
- A beautiful love poem... feelings of joy and desire :) - Best wishes in the contest, Lin :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2025 8:48:00 AM
Thanks, every so much, Anne-Lise and hope your weekend is delightful, too.
Date: 3/1/2025 7:05:00 AM
You create a very romantic scene Lin, you write these so well. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2025 7:13:00 AM
Thanks so very much for your sweet remarks, Tom.
Date: 3/1/2025 7:01:00 AM
Hi Lin, you do passion really well! It's a description of perfection of love and attraction. You have a really nice way of describing it all. Take care and smiles!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2025 7:13:00 AM
Merci merci, my Yankee friend. I always smile at your remarks.
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