Explosion of Light

A star, so proudly shining in the sky Bringing out energy into our souls Shining brilliantly just like some hot coals One day it breaks free, seeming to imply Its power is refocused, with a sigh Across the heavens the star streaks, its goals Is to reach the water beyond the poles Thus reaching an end where the star does fly Streak that is left over when it passes Almighty in its brightness and beauty Calmly refreshes the heart, caresses The brightest spot is the end, shown proudly An explosion of light so bright it’s seen For miles, significant in awe and keen Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/17/2014 6:07:00 PM
I was carried away by the emotions in this Russel to say its lovely is meager praise excellent pen Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/17/2014 7:57:00 AM
this is so stunning, russell.. i have a yen for stars and your images enchant me today.. truly twinkling in its display.. wow.. huggs
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Date: 1/16/2014 6:10:00 PM
Very well penned Russell! I loved it1 my best. chucl
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Date: 1/16/2014 3:46:00 PM
awesome write, my friend
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Date: 1/16/2014 9:39:00 AM
Good lines about the beauty of stars..Enjoyed reading it this morning..Thanks for stopping by..May this be a blessed day for you..Sara
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