Explosion

Explosion into myriad colors leading to a lovely loosening of the struggling summers

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/14/2016 2:52:00 AM

Re-visiting again, Probir. 'Twas a lovely monoku, and deserving of its placement.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2016 9:50:00 AM

Thank you...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 12:55:00 PM

Congrats in the contest, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2016 9:51:00 AM

Thank you Andrea....

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/13/2016 10:53:00 AM

Hi Probir, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. This Monoku gives me so many visions and i wish i could give you a seven for each vision. A seven from me Probir....Vlad.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/13/2016 11:18:00 AM

Thank you Vlad. A 7 from you is as much an hoour...

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/13/2016 8:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your monoku win Probir...very picturesque...god bless...^WW^

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/13/2016 11:19:00 AM

Thank you...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2016 8:42:00 PM

Probir, Congratulations on your awesome Monoku Win. Stop by my latest blog "Spellbound -I'm so late-" if you'd like. Sorry, it took me this long to close this contest. I hope it does not discourage you to enter any of my future contest. I do apologize. Love LINDA

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/12/2016 9:40:00 PM

What beautiful door the "inbox" opened just now! Here, outside my window, the spring air runs amok. Thanks for not just the win, but for the delightful win.....Thank YOU.......No question of not entering......Always prepared.....Please don't put me to shame by apologizing.....Keep in touch if possible... I 'll visit the blog a couple of minutes later......

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/24/2016 10:01:00 PM

The myriad colors and struggling summers, I enjoyed both as well. Unfortunately the character limit on this site doesn't allow me to go in depth as often as I would like. You are correct ... we all "see" the same thing, but then our "observations", and "interpretations" are all different. Not many people can see the beauty in that, so I'm happy that you see it. Cheers.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2016 10:22:00 PM

Yes Dear Friend. So through our very brief interactions of ours we are discovering a new definition of poetry: a creativity that produces an intellectual kaleidoscope. I am not sure if we will get this very definition among the thousand and one answers to what poetry is. ......... Thank you n cheers........

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/24/2016 12:03:00 AM

I'm assuming this is for the butterfly picture? Intriguing perception, Probir. I loved your two-fold alliteration and the image that came to mind with "lovely loosening" ... it really is an apt image of a butterfly that finally emerges from the cocoon! Best of luck.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2016 3:23:00 AM

Well. But then what about myriad colors? And the struggling summers what for? This is the beauty of poems which prose cannnot attain. The writer aims at a window. The connoisseur reader like you discover another. The latter still brighter. Thank you Timothy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2016 5:33:00 PM

Very nice. HOpe to see you on the winners' list.

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/23/2016 10:37:00 PM

Thank you Andrea....