Sneha Agarwal Poet Rhyme

Exploration At Mars

Everyday deep researches of mankind
From rockets to satellites all sublime
Started a journey towards Mars to find 
Another place for existence of air, water….life

Never speculated but captured a shot
Creatures like Sphinx was later thought
Eureka! For a new abode and neighbors
Or to be ruled by those unfathomable figures 

Life predicted but true face of life yet in dark
Else real estate people pioneer to embark
Exhaust all asset to create buildings and malls
Avarice says explore…explore… Earth is too small

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Jayne Eggins October 1, 2010 at 6:25 AM Congrates on having your poem featured this week ... thought provoking poetry smile well done Sneha ... love Jayne

Joe Maverick September 30, 2010 at 2:53 PM yes avarice seems to pervade to many areas, well put.

Poet Destroyer A September 29, 2010 at 8:21 AM Hello! Sneha, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."

Skat A September 29, 2010 at 8:21 AM SHEHA, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown September 27, 2010 at 6:44 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sheha. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 26, 2010 at 3:01 PM Congrats Sneha on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all today with luv...

James Fraser September 23, 2010 at 1:29 PM Many congratulations Sneha on your win in Carolyn' out of this world contest. Man will explore one day, let hope we behave >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown September 23, 2010 at 5:58 AM Congratulations Sneha for your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Sphinx Head on Mars?". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2010 at 9:37 PM That is a GREAT last line there, Sneha. congrats on your HM. lUv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan September 22, 2010 at 9:19 PM A very nice piece Sneha. Many congratulations for this HM.

John Freeman September 22, 2010 at 4:59 PM Congratulations Sneha on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta September 22, 2010 at 2:51 PM Congratulations on this win in the contest, Sneha

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 22, 2010 at 1:46 PM Congrats Sneha on your HM in this contest.. a wonderful write and honor for u to enjoy with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire September 22, 2010 at 11:31 AM I hope we can keep those realtors off Mars, Sneha. Clever approach to the contest. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta September 22, 2010 at 8:28 AM A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck, Sneha

Carolyn Devonshire September 22, 2010 at 7:31 AM :) Thanks for supporting the contest, Sneha! Best wishes, Carolyn