Exploding Flowers

Exploding Flowers

Spring is a mine field filled with exploding flowers
Blood reds and yellows shoot forth to score the land
Seeds have no brains to think of
Such things are beyond their grasp
Broadcasting themselves about on random wind
Sharing life with natures chirping birds
Roots hid in bunkers, their truth, their beauty
Underworld, motionless, in brown earth and gravel
Waiting for the sun or rain to call their name
Soon, along green grass, emergencies arise
Bright colors climbing from within
On veracious vines, hungry to find out 
They take the ground by storm
March over barren lands, spreading brilliance 
Conquer the new dawn day in light
Trees are above, on top of things in spring
Always there to cast a perfect shadow
On shady characters in disguise
Flowers rise, simply sit there pretending to be shy
Looking pretty, flushed with color  
Exploding with an ****** of seeds 
All the while smiling on the care free breeze

*(This poem is not for the Flower contest.  It is simply for pleasure.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/3/2015 1:30:00 AM
Wonderful write Earl,, why not enter the contest,, its amazing,, God bless!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 3/3/2015 8:32:00 AM
Good morning Dr. Sharma. Thank you so much for your kind words and your encouragement. I gave up rhyming when I was 7 years old. I do it for Poetry Soup from time to time to simply get a message out. I wanted to keep this particular poem in its purest form. Rhyming would contaminate it. That is why it is not going in the contest. I appreciate your support. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
Date: 3/2/2015 2:23:00 PM
You paint a picture with words that bring your images alive in the reader’s mind, and we too can appreciate the charm of flowers in their purity as a part of nature. The images are clear and the theme is constant throughout the piece. Good work. Emile. #7
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 3/2/2015 5:01:00 PM
Hi Emile, Thank you so much for your insightful and thoughtful words. I appreciate your comments and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Oh!....and thanks for the 7. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 3/2/2015 2:08:00 PM
Wonderful spring write - lovely imagery and personification Earl - I love the idea of seeds 'broadcasting themselves' a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/2/2015 5:23:00 PM
Hi Jan, I hope things are going good with you. Thank you for your kind comments. As you know, I'm not really into rhyming so I did not enter the flower poetry contest but I was in the mood for something flower oriented. Glad you liked it. Have a great night. Earl
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