Kim Rodrigues Poet Lento

Experiencing the Journey

“all of us are on a journey and the answers are unspoken"

                                            Quote by _Constance La France

EXPERIENCING THE JOURNEY

Wise clime - paradisaical.
Rise of hills; smoky grays and blues.
Highs of the frothing beastly peaks -
Guise with 360 degree views.

Eyes, tinted in the spew of seas.
Sighs, bravely weathered, on the cruise.
Tries the men’s hearts - hardened, seasoned.
Prize of Antarctica to lose.

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Christuraj Alex May 21, 2023 at 11:28 PM "paradisaical" - Volumes are said within a very beautiful word. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues May 23, 2023 at 6:32 AM Thank you so much, Christuraj!

Constance La France May 21, 2023 at 12:28 AM Kim, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2023 at 6:11 AM Thank you, Constance! As always a wonderful contest that lets us grow. Bless you!

Paige Hind May 16, 2023 at 11:12 AM Very deep. I liked it. Kim Rodrigues May 16, 2023 at 4:36 PM Thank you, Paige!

Lin Lane May 16, 2023 at 7:50 AM Any journey taken is worth making the most of it. Nicely written, Kim. Kim Rodrigues May 16, 2023 at 8:10 AM Yes! Thanks, Lin!

Victor Buhagiar May 16, 2023 at 1:52 AM You choose a cold journey, dear Kim. Kim Rodrigues May 16, 2023 at 5:35 AM Hugs ~ Kim