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Expectations

Expectations of the newly wed Are higher than the sky, To live in passion until they're dead With life as easy as pie. Expectations change with the years. A more subdued view is found. Through the ups and downs, smiles and tears We expect our love to stick around. Expectations years after the vow Revolve around loyalty and trust. Love is rarely mentioned now But companionship is a must. We expect our mate to be true And to be there by our side. To comfort us when we're blue And till the end of days abide. Those expectations of our youth We've forgotten along the way. We've settled for a different truth, That the romance doesn't always stay. for Paula Swanson's "Meeting Expectations " contest

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Date: 2/22/2011 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Francine in Paula Swanson's contest "Meeting Expectations". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/9/2011 4:31:00 AM
Sensational! Many congrats on your BIG WIN! Francine. Lainie
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Date: 2/5/2011 9:13:00 AM
Hi Francine - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/3/2011 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/2/2011 10:41:00 PM
hahaha, yup, that's for sure! Francine,I think you and I have much in common. Glad to see this won. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:48:00 PM
congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Francine
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:31:00 PM
Congrats Francine on your winning poem in the Meeting Expectations contest with this charming entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/2/2011 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations Francine in telling it how it is. And on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/2/2011 8:07:00 AM
You know how much I like this poem, Francine, so just let me add my congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/28/2011 9:04:00 AM
beautifully said from the start to the end good luck
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Date: 1/24/2011 2:00:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this excellent work..Love grows and compansionship gets better over the years..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2011 9:53:00 PM
Me, personally, I hope to exceed those expectations and have the romance blossom through the years and my companion grow deeper and deeper in love with me as our anniversaries mount. But, I love your poem just the same and am sure it will do well in the contest. As usual, I think your rhyme and meter are perfect. Nice job, Francine. Joe
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:46:00 PM
Sadly, the romance does fade in many relationships, Francine. I would like to think of a way to keep the fires of passion burning, but sometimes couples become more like good friends than lovers. Great entry for Paula's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/22/2011 7:30:00 PM
The divorce rate has been as much as seventy percent (that's greater than two out of three) at times. Does a marriage certificate have any value anymore? You have described everything quite well with your words and rhyming.
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Date: 1/22/2011 7:04:00 PM
how sad but true. i dont know what to say behind this. except my expectations are my hopes too. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 1/22/2011 6:20:00 PM
Excellent entry Francine on the expectations of life in general but that first set of lines about the newlyweds is PRICELESS especially the passion part.. great one..good luck...
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Date: 1/22/2011 10:01:00 AM
Well said Francine, its a love and friendship that must be worked on and valued everyday.... just my thoughts...always Michael
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