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Expectations

He was an island, strong and vast, And I was a ship with a heavy load to cast. To reach him, I had to pass his deep ocean, But the waves were too rough, too much commotion. He demanded all my time and all my heart, And I thought I could give him that, right from the start. But his expectations grew, like an endless sea, And I found myself drowning, unable to break free. I tried to navigate his every storm, But his ocean was too deep, too much to conform. And though I tried to make it clear, His ocean just wouldn't disappear. So I had to break free and sail away, Even though it hurt me more every day. Now he's mad, says I caused the pain, But it was his ocean of expectations that restrained. I hope he finds what he's looking for, But I can't be his ship anymore. I wish him the best in life, But I won't be caught in his ocean of strife.

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Date: 6/27/2023 7:54:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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