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Exotic Dancers

little monkey face little Dragon Monkeys sway they’re dancing orchids * * Note -Flowers Imitating Monkeys--Dracula simian, and Orchis simia

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Date: 3/27/2014 2:36:00 PM
I had to check this one out because I submitted a work with a similar title. I see you are not writing about the same thing. This haiku has decent descriptiveness. That's not easy to do with such a short poem.
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John Beam
Date: 3/27/2014 7:53:00 PM
Thanks Robert, that was one of the points of this poem exotic does not have to be erotic

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