John Beam Poet Haiku

Exotic Dancers

little monkey face                                                                                                        little Dragon Monkeys sway                                                                                            they’re dancing orchids                  *                                                                         *                                                                                                                                                               Note -Flowers Imitating Monkeys--Dracula simian, and Orchis simia

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Robert Pettit March 27, 2014 at 2:36 PM I had to check this one out because I submitted a work with a similar title. I see you are not writing about the same thing. This haiku has decent descriptiveness. That's not easy to do with such a short poem. John Beam March 27, 2014 at 7:53 PM Thanks Robert, that was one of the points of this poem exotic does not have to be erotic