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Exotic

Shimmering beautiful crisp pure waters; So inviting I can see the bottom just. . . Leaves of the palm trees wave and invite me; to the place where I wished that I could live Exotic beautiful place like to heaven Where God is? So wonderful are the mountains; And glorious is the fountains; that flow, flow, flowing waters; Peace and hollow... there is no sadness there; Birds of heaven living here; And the beauty of the crisp cool breeze; Reminds me of an early morning; to this place where I wanna be I could live Exotic Living the luxury; I am reminded that God made these beautiful, beautiful places for you, for me; Oh! those pretty, beautiful flowers; YOU can smell the aroma for hours on hours The lavender breeze just invited me; To believe in the environment; So when I close my eyes I awaken so mesmerized in awe, my surroundings Exotic written by James Edward Lee Sr. June 27 2017 (c)2017

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Date: 7/3/2017 5:44:00 AM
Such depth and beauty in the human soul. You should always write poetry my friend.
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 7/5/2017 6:21:00 PM
Thanks for the read and encouragement. All creativity comes from God it's our choice to process it in the right way. As my catch-phase goes "There's praise in words and words in praise" Also I've felt inspired by 5 words in your comment so there's a lyric dedicated to you called "Beauty in the Human Soul" enjoy I hope? ---James Edward Lee Sr.

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