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Shimmering beautiful crisp pure waters;
So inviting I can see the bottom just. . .
Leaves of the palm trees wave and invite me;
to the place where I wished that I could
live
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beautiful place like to heaven
Where God is?

So wonderful are the mountains;
And glorious is the fountains;
that flow, flow, flowing waters;

Peace and hollow...
there is no sadness there;
Birds of heaven living here;
And the beauty of the crisp cool breeze;
Reminds me of an early morning;
to this place where I wanna be I could live
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Living the luxury;
I am reminded that God made these
beautiful, beautiful places for you, for me;
Oh!  those pretty, beautiful flowers;
YOU can smell the aroma for hours on hours
The lavender breeze just invited me;
To believe in the environment;
So when I close my eyes 
I awaken so mesmerized in awe, my surroundings
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written by James Edward Lee Sr.
June 27 2017  (c)2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 7/3/2017 5:44:00 AM
Such depth and beauty in the human soul. You should always write poetry my friend.
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 7/5/2017 6:21:00 PM
Thanks for the read and encouragement. All creativity comes from God it's our choice to process it in the right way. As my catch-phase goes "There's praise in words and words in praise" Also I've felt inspired by 5 words in your comment so there's a lyric dedicated to you called "Beauty in the Human Soul" enjoy I hope? ---James Edward Lee Sr.
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