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Exit Strategy

We exit as we entered, naked and screaming. 4/26/2021

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/30/2021 10:38:00 PM

congrats on your top win, John ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2021 4:05:00 PM

I hope I won't be screaming. hahaha. GREAT job, John. congrats.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/30/2021 8:45:00 AM

LOL, figurative for some, literal for others. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/30/2021 8:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. "So Very True." A creative write. Have a blessed day............

Marilene Evans

Date: 4/30/2021 8:10:00 AM

How do you know that, John? I know we scream when we entered, when we exit too??? LOL..... Congrats... Well done.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/30/2021 6:46:00 AM

Hi John, Your one-liner rings so true. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Carol Mitra

Date: 4/30/2021 5:57:00 AM

Absolutely one hundred percent...Congrats on your win John :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/30/2021 5:09:00 AM

True.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/27/2021 12:49:00 PM

hey it could be fun if you were making love though John lol - sorry couldn't resist lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2021 12:21:00 PM

Thanks for sharing John, I found the reading to be very inspiring, particularly considering that our first sign of life at birth is a cry, and our last sign of life is also a cry, though it may not be ours. However, many argue that it is dependent on the size of your bank account and total assets.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/26/2021 11:00:00 AM

I’m hoping the passengers in my car won’t be screaming. Also I hope they are cloth seats as the leather ones are a bit hot for my naked body. Sorry I couldn’t resist *lol*

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/26/2021 9:52:00 AM

That is so often the case, John. Something to remember, to be sure!