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EXIT crying baby first step friends jumping love found nights long hands strong road turns hands weak nights short love lost friends sitting last step laughing baby ENTER laughing baby warm mother distant mountains dancing years holding hands flying lights thoughts turn walking lights reaching hands waiting years foreboding mountains cold mother crying baby EXIT

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Date: 12/24/2012 2:04:00 AM
Whoa Ralph! Your writing style is amazing! I love the mixture of irony and the build up to the circular events. Very cleverly done and very well written!
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Date: 12/21/2012 9:27:00 PM
Ralph, stopping by with my warmest thoughts my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
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Date: 12/7/2012 3:58:00 PM
nice write Ralph
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Date: 12/7/2012 9:15:00 AM
Interesting contrasts in this work..Enjoyed reading today...I am glad that I chose this one to read..Thanks for stopping by..You did a good job of interpertation of my work "Miles And Miles" in that one of my purposes was express feelings of sorrow for the trees...I also was hoping that someone would see another thought that I was expressing..I wonder if you could be that person..Sara
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Date: 11/29/2012 11:35:00 AM
love the journey,great write Ralph
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Date: 11/29/2012 8:29:00 AM
awesome write friend Ralph. a life cycle...thanks for sharing and for dropping by on my poem. Good day always! :)
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Date: 11/28/2012 3:19:00 PM
sounds like cycle of life in some parts!! Very interesting one, ralph.
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Date: 11/24/2012 9:09:00 AM
wow wonderful poem, Ralph, cannot say i fully relate to this, but my imagination works wonders for me...
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