Mark Trichet Poet Senryu

Existential Pondering

Pondering the universe, vast
     Curious for my part
             Spontaneously, thou scratch my ****…







Marvin Celestial’s Poetry Contest – Senryu On Your Existence
20 June 2015

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Richard Lamoureux July 4, 2015 at 8:49 AM Ha ha, good one! Congrats.

Constance La France July 4, 2015 at 7:49 AM Mark, congratulations on your placement in the contest, the first two lines a dream the last one... aaah not sure what to say about that lol

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 3, 2015 at 10:35 PM Congrats on ur win Mark!

Skat A July 3, 2015 at 6:50 PM MARK, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A July 3, 2015 at 6:27 PM Mark, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2015 at 4:59 PM How could I forget this one. congrats on the HM!

Pandita Sietesantos July 3, 2015 at 2:47 PM Tehehehe - particularly love the last line! Congrats on the win! Pandita

John Lawless July 3, 2015 at 12:11 PM Well done Mark, so many seem to miss the mark with the sneery form

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2015 at 6:52 PM haha. I love how you did not take it too seriously. Mine is the same (when I ever get ready to post it!)

Jill Spagnola June 20, 2015 at 3:27 AM True Senryu. Love it!