Existential Emptiness

White-jacketed and stethescoped,

He clicks down the empty corridor

In his loafers and khakis.

 

The rooms of patients long gone home

To heaven or hell are dark and silent.

‘Round the corner, the janitor waves

But says nothing, noticing the fatigue

In the doctor’s eyes.

 

Another day gone by, he thinks.

How many more will go?

Too many terminal illnesses have

Crept in

Taking over.

 

Out in the lot, the Porsche is waiting.

For the first time in his life

The doctor hesitates

Then,

Realizing his sin

He walks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 9:42 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem today but....what did he do wrong? Please continue writing and sharing with us Jennifer. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 4:11 PM
What is his sin? Nice writing here. Keep writing. Sara
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